| Reviews for Burn |
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   WereWolf2000 chapter 1 . 4/29/2019 I agree with xTrustyx. This has the potential to be a wonderful multi-chapter story. |
| Mashiro Ruri chapter 1 . 3/9/2018 Ouch! This is just so... painful |
| dontaskk chapter 1 . 2/1/2018 dude this would be so good as a full story! imagine people finding out the infamous Strawhat Luffy was a former slave |
| Faezier chapter 1 . 1/27/2018 Please Turn this into a Story! It’s soo good! PLEASE! I Love it so far! |
| Heliana Kaye chapter 1 . 12/13/2017 So, I read this story at least 15 times since I added it to the favourites, like a month ago. It's one of the best ideas I have ever found on this site. Will you please continue it? |
| Jui-Imouto-Chan chapter 1 . 10/15/2017 Ugghhhhh I neeedddd moooorrreeee...! That was really good, and the fact that Ace has to do this to and for his little brother is just painful but awhhhhh. Second chapter, please? |
| tasarlaluminitsa chapter 1 . 8/29/2017 please continue! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2017 I think this should become a full story. That would be amazing! You have my full support! |
| Hopeshard chapter 1 . 2/21/2017 This would make a great story |
| story magic chapter 1 . 1/18/2017 i hope it gets turned into a story, this is awesome |
| REboredom chapter 1 . 12/4/2016 a bit short, but I would like to see this continued |
| aurorareality chapter 1 . 11/15/2016 I know I'm really late, but I think you should keep going with this one. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/3/2016 1) you didnt tell us the mark on his back(but i can guess) and 2) yeah i think you should make a series its good! |
| Asuka1920 chapter 1 . 7/16/2016 Please turn it into a story. It would be awesome. |
| betternatethanlever chapter 1 . 7/15/2016 You should really make this into a series it would a good plot and background it would be an interesting read |
