Jasper is so careful with Alice. I know he knows or can guess what happened to her but has he processed it? I keep expecting him to start to crack for the guilt he didn't protect Alice.

i especially loved to see how the whole situation affects the rest of the family, poor emmett

i’m so happy you updated!

thanks for the update, loved the length of the chapter, i hope you‘ll continue it soon!

i‘m happy about the short interlude but i can’t wait for a longer chapter!

oh my poor babies, reading this made me so sad, but of course i still liked the chapter. i just hope everything will get better for them

They got her out of there. But I don’t think Sri or Michael will let them go that easily. Please keep going!

Alice is not to be trifled with; go Alice. I wonder if Michael also brain washed James, because James did tell Bella that he had killed Alice’s sire. Intriguing story! Please continue.

oh, i wrote that before i saw that you updated, but i‘m looking forward to the next real chapter then tomorrow!

i love this story, i hope you’ll update it soon!

Please continue! I can only imagine how an empath can manipulate you. Hopefully Alice will remember jasper before things he too far. Please continue!
Ps: I hope Michael didn’t rape Alice in the throne room; I also wonder how she got him off of him.

Please write more! I'm going to go crazy if I don't get to read more!

Interesting premise. A better summary would draw in more readers. The angst is perfect.

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