...Yeah, this Booker needs to die. NOW.
He's going to fuck up more things, in an irrepairable way.

...Nope, still getting Bad Vibes from Booker.

...I'm Seriously starting to suspect that the 'Booker DeWitt' they're traveling with is a Comstock!Booker. And therefore should probably be shot post-haste.

Pls update soon!

This is pretty good, but since this is published on January, spamak47 is right but he spoiled it for me. Looks like they won't have the relationship that they have in infinite. Friends, father daughter moments. Very small romantic moments (maybe). She was only trying to kill Comstock, no way she would try to kill booker, and he can't become Comstock anymore and that was a different Comstock since he got anna killed, so what the hell. This is your version so I don't care. Basically ep 2 but a hell of a lot different.

Isn't it a bit cold how it seems like Elizabeth doesn't love him? Well this is your version of the infinite after all. Hell Comstock was only created since he was baptized and all the versions of him are gone. Never mind this is posted before march when ep 2 came out. She sure as hell loved him like hell. You did play ep 2 yes?

This is a good start

I knew it, I knew it, I knew it. Finally Elizabeth and Silas finally admitted their true feelings for each other. I feel bad that Booker destroyed Columbia the way that he did. I knew that there was something wrong with him. I know that a twist is coming that involves him. I can't wait to see what it is. Thank you for writing this chapter. I was afraid that you gave up on the story all together. I can't wait to read more chapters of this amazing story. You have me hooked, line, and sinker.

holy shit Booker obliberated DC and columiba in every single universe in one go. Talk about mass geneocide. Will there be consequences for him do we get the reactions of the population in the "first world" to this vicious "terrorist attack"? keep it up!

I love this story you have been crafting thus far. I am sorry if I am late to the party in terms of reviews. I just started reading this last night. I got to say that I am hooked though. You have been writing this particular story for a while. Please keep making more chapters because I know that Chapter 11 is the ending to this story. Please come back and finish this amazing story that you started. I promise you that I will read every new chapter you write until the end. Thank you for crafting this amazing story, and please write more chapters. Would you Kindly.

aaaaaaaaaah!

Oh, how I love this story!
I'm so glad I found it!

Eleanor Lamb is one of my favourite video game characters, I love how you've incorporated her and her Big Daddy into this!
Plus you've brought the Lutece's and the Lighthouses into it!Robert's speech, sounds exactly how I picture he would talk!

Oh, it's a favourite of mine! Waiting excitedly for the next chapters!

.. Booker is the Comstick they are looking for isn't he?

Okay... lets see how this works out.

I'm not sure what to make out of Booker.
But awesome story. Keep it going.

You can't stop phase one!

Sorry, sorry. Couldn't resist.

The first world, huh? Present day?

I have NO IDEA where this is going, but I don't doubt it'll be very interesting.