Maybe it’s my reading comprehension skills or maybe you didn’t write their timeline really clear but WTF it’s been 2 years how old are they now what? I’m lost. I really like the story but I’m confusion

I'm in love with your story. The way you mixed past and present gave the story a great flow and I also enjoyed the character growth of Edward and Bella during the story. I read it in less than a day

Just finished this story in all of two days because I couldn’t put it down! You are such an incredible writer and I love how you tweaked the characters to be more relatable and made them your own. I really enjoyed this story and wanted it to never end!

Lovely lovely story!

this chapter makes me ridiculously happy and homesick at the same time! I'm from Nanaimo and while I have enjoyed all their adventures in this story, something familiar makes me love it more

Such a beautiful story. Well done!

Much love,
Ashlie Christine

What a brilliant tale. This you should tweak and publish
R

Such a wonderful story. I feel like I know so much more and feel like I’ve traveled to some fantastic places. I really enjoyed your take on the characters and their story. Thanks for writing. Really wish there was more. Hope u r still writing. Would love to read more.

WOW. This was so amazing! By chapter one I was hooked, it became an instant favorite. I've had this fic for years on my to read list, and only got to it now. It's the Twilight 10th anniversary making me nostalgic for good fanfiction...

Btw, I was shocked to see this only has 1000 reviews. If this was released in 2010, it would've been huge! (Not that reviews matter that much, but honestly, this fic has all the elements of the twific classics we love from that time. idk how to explain this hahaha).

Anyway, thank you so much for sharing it, I'm so in love with your characters. I'm going to check out your other stories now.

Très belle histoire, j’ai beaucoup aimé.

Lu avec Google Translate. Montréal, Québec.

Wow

Thank you for the beautiful story. I loved her with all my heart. I liked your intelligent Edward and his unselfish love for Bella, amazing descriptions of the nature of Argentina-I already want to go there! Good luck in creativity!

This was fucking brilliant. I don't really use expletives in writing but I really needed to make you understand how much I loved it. I enjoyed every single word of it. It's a classic, you know, of the fanfiction world. Please keep wrting.

It looks like you have traveled a lot yourself. Are you like, a real-life Edward?
Loved this chapter. You really know how to get a person root for two people desperately.

I cried. Hard. I really wish you didn't do this to me. Actually on second thoughts, please keep it going. I want to cry. I've not got a choice if I want to cry or not, but I can still choose who makes me cry.