Reviews for The Call For Order
Mely-Val chapter 31 . 9/5
Hello my friend! long time no see! I am very angry didnt send me any notice of the actualization! This cant be! Because i have been thinking of this fanfic for more than one year!
As always, you dont stop amazing me. Your fanfic is THE BEST i have EVER read of FF7, and mind you, i have read tons for around 10 years!.
Now that i have seen the Remke of the game, your Barret nailed the one of the game in deph and emotion. Also Tifa! Im very glad you keep going!
Also, i didnt forget my promise of the drawings! Actually at this moment im unemployed (because Covid), and ill keep working on BOTH pictures i promised. I still have the picture you sent me. For real, ahahhaah.
Do you know what do i see on this chapter? that Vincent is at his limit. As in body, mostly, like, its screaming at him to stop, to take a breath. Also Denzel know something bad is going on, he knows deep down that Vincent is not a bad person and he cares about him...so i guess that naturally as any kid, Denzel will tell Tifa or Barret or Yuffie what is going on with Vincent, because he is concerned.
My god this cant be, how can i didnt get the notification of the actualization! :(
ON THIS MONTH you will see the picture of Galian FINISHED, and all start also right away with the next one! I PROMISE. (I have never forgotten).
Also, did i told you that im living in Barcelona? ahaha.
Take care! i send you many hugs!
MandiraIrade chapter 31 . 8/10
Heavens! I read and savored every word. How much I love this strange relationship between Denzel and Vincent. And the description of each pistolite demon, makes me see them differently. More real.
I hope so much that you update soon, please!
Of course, without putting pressure on anyone, but I cannot put into words how much I am connected in this fanfic haha ...
alesana4ever chapter 31 . 6/3
It's been awhile since I've caught up with this. For awhile I got tired of fanfiction and the ff7 fandom in general until recently. Though I did have to reread a bit to understand what was going on and I can't believe that I stopped reading this. It's great and I remember why I love this story so much. The Death Gigas scene was amazing but I truly enjoyed the moment with Denzel and Vincent.

I hope that everything is going better for you now and that you are staying happy and healthy. I look forward to reading more.
Ethear chapter 31 . 4/21
I am so happy to see a new chapter! I understand how life can sweep you away, and how hard it can be to wrangle new words onto a page. I for one am supremely pleased to see more of your writing and look forward to more :)
Nevaratoiel chapter 31 . 3/10
Just posting the same comment I wrote yesterday (and edited today) on AO3.

No way! You updated...

I can't describe how I felt when I opened up my profile this morning. Perhaps a dysfunctional fangirl? And believe me, I'm not prone to 'fangirlism'.

Thank you so much for the new chapter. It was a joy to read. And after such a long time itbwas definitely worth the way. Just don't wait another 1,5 year for the next update. I don't think i can handle that!

The decription of Death Gigas maked my skin crawl when I read it, as well as how the whole scene evolves. Like a Frankensteinish monster sure, but I really never even considered rotten flesh and the stench of it. Pretty gruesome.

I always love Vincent's interaction with children, it makes for the best scenes and conversations. The way Denzel reacts to the looming figure of Vincent was epic. It would make sense that Vincent is exhausted and hurt after such a transformation and not to mention Gigases limit break. Well written indeed.

Overall, it was another excellent chapter and I had to read it again to fully understand the complexity (in a good way).
Releqah chapter 31 . 3/9
Thank you so much for the new chapter!
melphina82 chapter 31 . 3/8
welcome back glad to see ya , writing again
xkelbix chapter 31 . 3/7
Yay! It's so good to see you're back! Jeez this chapter was tense for a bit there, I was worried what was going to happen to the gang. Once again you've written an amazing chapter, though I can understand why it was difficult. You've pulled through though :D I'm sorry to hear about your job loss, but happy to hear about your new love :P Thank you for the mention, I really appreciate that, and know that I will continue to support you :)
Additional Stickers chapter 31 . 3/7
Thanks for sharing!
Sorry I don't have any in-depth commentary, I just wanted to show my appreciation. Seeing this update pop in my inbox was a treat!
Releqah chapter 30 . 1/4
This is genuinely my favourite FFVII fic I’ve ever read, I really hope that you please continue it, despite it being over a year since your last update (it has happened before! :) ) and that your health is better now. Thank you so much for the chapters this far!
Makoes chapter 30 . 11/26/2019
No matter how many times I re-read this story, it still has me glued to the screen!
I hope your health allows you to continue this journey to the end, because its definitely a journey that has captivated a lot of people! Both fictional and beyond!
GamerGirl5 chapter 30 . 9/20/2019
Just coming over here after finishing this on Ao3 because this story is amazing and deserves to be reviewed twice for the utter brilliant work you've done. I do hope your health is becoming better, sometimes life just really doesn't hold back, I get it. Just know that whenever you're back to post the contuations of you're amazing story, we'll be here waiting.
Guest chapter 30 . 8/24/2019
You know, I read this the day it came out, but was on mobile and forgot to write a comment when I got home...better late then never?

Its great to see some further advancements with the kids, though Danzel still continues to be a little shit.
I am guessing that this transformation is an empowered Death Gigas, which makes me wonder...just what instigated the transformation...and how did the others know to find the kids there?
Will we get to see a face off between Death Gigas and the tank?

How goes your health? I've often wondered how you are adjusting to things, and if you've found something to help with the fibro?
I also stumbled across something that immediately made me think of you, though I don't think I can link it here. It's about writing.
Ethear chapter 30 . 7/23/2019
Loving this story, hope to see more soon!
Chocoborider92 chapter 29 . 7/10/2019
Great chapter!
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