| Reviews for Winter From My Wings |
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   Funnybombninja chapter 1 . 1/6/2015 Nice I want more pleAse |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/11/2014 Wow, this was pretty good. Really want to read more now. Please update soon. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/28/2014 Please,please,PLEASE update this soon its so cool! |
| ShadowWolfBeast chapter 1 . 5/30/2014 Woah great start ! Really want to see more now. |
| Lance58 chapter 1 . 4/26/2014 Please update soon! This is very intriguing |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/24/2014 Please please please up date this soon is interesting and cool and aswsome!- |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2014 please up date this soon it's really cool! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/1/2014 This is a cool and interesting story it has one of my favorit things in it and that would be a dragon and by the way great work and can't what in till next chapter! |
| AvidReader88 chapter 1 . 2/21/2014 This is amazingly interesting! I have not read something like this before, and it has captured my interest. I wonder what will happen next...will Elsa listen at all? Can she not stop the winter, but is she pretending that she can, cause of fear of her own power maybe...like in the movie? What will Anna do next time, will she just go and stay there till Elsa listens...it would be a bit funny if Anna just went and played in the snow until the dragon decided to stop her from doing it. Your writing style is very good too. It's easy to follow, and portrays your ideas nicely. I look forward to your next update with bated breath! Great job by the way :) -Avid |
| Entei chapter 1 . 1/21/2014 I can't believe someone wrote something this bad, I think the story in itself could be interesting, if the author was able to write properly, what is this? |
| Entei chapter 1 . 1/21/2014 why would I read this?, garbage, awful |
| The Human Torch chapter 1 . 1/21/2014 The story here is boring, not interesting at all. |
| moonstruckgirl15 chapter 1 . 1/13/2014 I am thoroughly looking forward to this. Please update soon! |
| Anon chapter 1 . 1/11/2014 This is really good! Please continue writing! 3 |
| Anon chapter 1 . 1/11/2014 The concept sounds really interesting and I'd like to see where it goes. There are some grammatical errors here and there, like how it should be "how low has your kingdom sunk" since "sunken" is more for descriptive purposes (e.g. a sunken ship), etc. but most of it is otherwise fine and flows well. However, the one thing that really pulls me out of the story is how the tense keeps changing. It seems to go from past to present to past and back to present and it just jolts me out every time it happens. I personally find it very distracting and it's my one real criticism. However, I am looking forward to the continuation of this fic. It all sounds very novel so far. |
