I have been told by several people (including myself) that I am a grammar Nazi. So, I thought, why not put it to good use? I'll accept almost anything, as long as you're nice. My critiques are mostly limited to grammar. However, my favorite fanfics are Calvin & Hobbes, Arthur, and Portal. Please ask questions if you have any!

I WILL NOT WRITE YOUR STORY FOR YOU! I will correct the grammar and spelling, but I will NOT write it for you. You're talented enough as you are!

Grammar and story flow. I will fix awkward sentences, fix typos, and maybe add some better vocab words if I see fit.

Character development. I am not familiar with 98% of the subjects here to tell you if your story is "in character."

Calvin & Hobbes, Arthur, Portal, Rugrats, that sort of thing. 90's cartoons are awesome, but I can do other stories too.

I will NOT accept stories with excessive swearing, sex, violence, gore, etc. Think like this: If it's in an M rated video game, I probably won't like it. I like superheros, but not Gears of War. Does that make sense? I also will NOT accept Twilight, Harry Potter, Danny Phantom, or anything with magic under any circumstances. Lastly, I don't celebrate holidays, so I won't be able to give you any feedback on that. If you have questions, ask me.

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