Queen Lua 's Beta Reader Profile |
Author has written 13 stories | Fire Emblem, Final Fantasy X, Final Fantasy IX, Last of Us, and Dragon Age. |
β : Queen Lua is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
Hi. I've written quite a lot here, and I enjoy reading other people's stuff, and I really like to talk shop with other writers, thus—I would love to beta read for folks around here.If I end up beta-ing your piece, I'll generally have a review back to you within a few (2-4) days. I am honest but not unkind; my writeup will tend to be a substantial letter including the scenes I liked best, stuff that's really working, etc, along with things that need fixing, and ideas for fixing it. If I think this means adding a lot more scenes, or drastically restructuring your piece, I will say so. Remember, I'm not your boss; if you see some of my suggestions and decide you don't like them (you want to fix the issue a different way, or you simply don't think it's an issue at all), you're not going to upset me or hurt my feelings. You have to do what you think is best for your story. I only ask that you seriously consider what I'm saying before you decide to dismiss it. Upon request, I'll generally be happy to read over subsequent revisions of a piece, in case you do decide to overhaul things substantially. |
My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
I'm not very good at boasting about myself, but feel free to peek at any of the fics I've written to get an idea of my writing strengths. I like to think I've got a good idea of how to make a story "flow" nicely/smoothly and how to do realistic characterizations. |
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
I'm not going to nitpick every spelling error, grammatical flub, questionable word choice, etc. I'll point out obvious ones as I notice them, of course, but I really prefer to talk about larger structural issues (i.e. "does this story flow well?") and characterization issues ("is this character behaving in a consistent, believable manner?"). |
Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
I enjoy reading Tellius (Fire Emblem: Path of Radiance and Radiant Dawn) fic best, and know the canon quite well. I'm happy to beta Magvel (Fire Emblem: The Sacred Stones), The Last of Us, Final Fantasy X, Final Fantasy IX, and Dragon Age: Inquisition, though I am not hyper-familiar with those 'verses the same way I am with Tellius, so my focus will be more on the story's structure and less on adherence to canon.I especially like genfic in all fandoms. |
Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
I generally don't care for self-inserts or OC characters, though you can feel free to send it my way anyways—I'll tell you if it's not my kind of thing. |
Beta Preferences
Language: English |
Content Rating: Fiction K » M |
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Game Dragon Age Game Final Fantasy IX
| Game Final Fantasy X Game Fire Emblem
| Game Last of Us
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Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
General Romance Humor Drama Adventure
| Mystery Horror Angst Supernatural Suspense
| Sci-Fi Fantasy Spiritual Tragedy Western
| Crime Family Hurt/Comfort Friendship
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