FACELESSWRITER11 's Beta Reader Profile
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since: 12-04-09, id: 2167434
Author has written 10 stories | Naruto, Kingdom Hearts, Princess Tutu, Darren Shan Saga/Cirque Du Freak, Death Note, Mighty Boosh, Left 4 Dead, and Misc. Movies.
β : FACELESSWRITER11 is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
Hello. I'll tell you my name when you ask, and I'll try and make this short. I like editing stories and find that a second pair of eyes, those of a stranger, catch things the writer originally does not. I both edit and write and passionately enjoy both. What I can say about my editing technique is that it is incredibly thorough. I do not simply read through and give you a response, rather I trek through your writing and highlight what can be improved but also what you are doing right. At the end of your story I will leave notes expanding on my comments throughout the work. And if you want to talk to me about these comments, then we will talk about them. br /

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If you want me as a Beta (however remarkable that may be) then drop me a message/email detailing who you are and what category your story is. If I don't respond in a week, give me up as dead. br /

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Also, though I know most people on here are delicate, lovely flowers, but I do not want to edit for someone only for them to become defensive and fight with me. I am as intimidating as a snail but I will not tolerate anger with my criticism. Know that I am not trying to anger you, only help you and help your story grow strong. Please be willing to accept some criticism with a well mannered smile. br /

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That's all from me.

My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
I am a hound at picking up flow and word choice. What I can assure you is that I will go through your work thoroughly with a keen eye. I will read through your story more than once and go through the changes I have advised to make sure my judgement was correct. I give both constructive and positive feedback concerning the way a sentence is structured, spelling, or use of punctuation; a spoonful of sugar with one of medicine. I understand how pestering it is sometimes to have large pieces of something you have written rewritten entirely or deleted. I may advise you to alter a paragraph but unless you personally ask me to I will not rewrite it. There are times I may add in a suggestion, a sentence of my own I think fits, but it is up to you whether to keep it. Finally, I will not forget that this is your story and not mine.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
I would say weakness and time. Sometimes I am not very forceful and will only advise when I want to insist. I am kind of, sort of, entirely a meek person. I am sure however this will improve with more editing experience. My lack of time sometimes results in stories taking a long while to be edited. I will email you to keep in touch if I think something is going to be late. If none of that bothers you, or you too find you take two years to brew a cup of tea, then soldier on and consider us alike.
Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
I have, and do, read near anything but like everyone I have preferences. I enjoy reading things that are quite dark, perhaps offensive, terrifying and filled with interesting little bits and pieces. I am a big fan of terror, and general tragedy. What I have labelled as my categories are the ones I am much preferred to do, however there are many many more. And I don't mind sexually explicit material. I read it leisurely.
Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
I have some things I will not go near with a ten foot pole as a Beta reader or reader in general. There's Mpreg, OOCness (to a certain point), family stories, and soppy romance. If your story incorporates any of these, let me know so I can judge whether I can handle it. So, that's all from me.
Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Movie Atonement
Anime Baccano!
Book Darren Shan Saga/Cirque Du Freak
Anime Death Note
Book Demonata
Cartoon Detentionaire
Game DRAMAtical Murder/ドラマティカル マーダー
Book Evil Genius
Tv Fargo
Anime Gankutsuou: Count of Monte Cristo
Book Gingerbread, Rachel Cohn
Movie Inception
Movie Insidious, 2011
Tv IT Crowd
Comic Johnny the Homicidal Maniac
Game Kingdom Hearts
Game Left 4 Dead
Anime Loveless
Tv Mighty Boosh
Tv Nathan Barley
Book Peter Pan
Anime Princess Tutu
Misc Radio Dramas
Movie Rise of the Guardians
Tv Sherlock
Movie Sherlock Holmes
Game Silent Hill
Cartoon Superjail!
Cartoon Time Warp Trio
Tv True Detective
Book Wuthering Heights
Tv Young Dracula
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
General
Romance
Humor
Drama
Adventure
Mystery
Horror
Angst
Supernatural
Suspense
Fantasy
Tragedy
Crime
Hurt/Comfort