i am not experienced and could probably just comment on your word preferences and the grammars and point out a few corrections and over all comment on my thoughts about your story as gently but not sugar-coated as possible... and maybe suggest a few things, but then again it is a suggestion you may or may not take it...

i can easily understand where a story is going at and try to help the writer improve by maybe suggesting things that could improve the story's plot

i easily get bored with predictable stories and tend to be biased and am easily discouraged, but i don't give up hope and would still try to help. but i may not be able to help with audience impact as much as you would like.

i mostly prefer SasuHina, Hiccstrid or an RotBTD fanfic... and maybe some once upon a time fics... what i mean is i usually prefer things i know about... and also Anidala fics...

i'm not an expert on angst and horror and maybe not so much in the sci-fi side or the mystery side considering i too am having a few problems with my own stories with that.

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