MRBee 's Beta Reader Profile
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since: 06-29-08, id: 1617730
Author has written 17 stories | Naruto.
β : MRBee is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
Well im not sure what my 'betareading style' is but i do Naruto, Air Gear, Bleach, Rosario + Vampire, Teen Titans, and Rave (Rave Master).
those six i know from the manga/anime, so i will tell you if you messed up with following the Canon or just messed up with information.

Im A HUGE NaruHina supporter and love writing fics about the couple, though i find it entertaining to read crack-pairing for naruto once in a while (but i hate having to read Hinata out on the sidelines)

I like to do most Genre but usually must include romance. whether its rom/humor, advent, action, blah blah, as long as there is some fluffy/or romantic moments.

Well as you might already know, i like NaruHina and i am REALLY GOOD with that couple.
I also do NaruTayu and maybe other Naru-crack pairings as long as it makes sense.

As for bleach, i usually prefer IchiHime, and i don't know any other couples besides them. I don't do IchiRuki, or UruHime.

For air gear, i like Ikki with any of the three main girls. I DONT DO IKKI-akito/agito (WTF YAIO?)

My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
im good at finding problems with grammar, punctuation and that good stuff. i could find and perhaps correct plot/story flow. can make characters act less OOC with simple actions.
I'm really good with NaruHina stuff.

Im better at non AU fics, though i don't mind doing it. AU fics usually have characters acting OOC, but i'll do my best to align them to their most appropriate actions and emotions and such.

My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
i might miss a few things, (like one or two spelling/grammar/blah mistakes)
i get confused with the way some people word things, so i'll give a heads up before i decide to reword things.

oh and VERB-TENSE INCONSISTENCY! CRAP! i hate that stupid rule. Gah!!!!

Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
NaruHina adventure-romance-humor (as long as it is NaruHina and there is romance, im down)
Im down also to do NaruTayu as long as Hinata is characterized properly and will not be put down in anyway

For NaruHina fics, i prefer it when they don't fall inlove in a day, and show character development as they learn to like eachother (well Naruto learns to like Hinata) I could help with Character develop. if you want, but you have to make sure they don't get together in a ridiculous fashion, Naruto won't fall in love with Hinata like that, he has to LEARN to love her, but could like her fast. so get them together by means of 'liking eachother'

Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
I don't do any fic where Hinata is put down. If its a NaruX(non hinata) fic, im ok but Hinata must be happy or ok with the change (though im not so down with her paired up randomly... i must really like who she is paired up with and she MUST be in good terms with naruto (and is not heartbroken whensoever)
I also don't Do tragedy NaruHina, if its gonna end bad, don't ask me. If there are brief moments of sadness between the two, fine, as long as they get back together happy and all.

I also i don't want to do, NARUTO IS SUPER STRONG fics, nor do i do HAREMS, YAOI, and YURI.
i think Naruto should have one love and just one.

Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Anime Air Gear
Anime Bleach
Anime Naruto
Anime Rosario + Vampire
Cartoon Teen Titans
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
General
Romance
Humor
Drama
Adventure
Hurt/Comfort
Friendship