Writing:Description- Sometimes, I'm too worried about the description that I ruin the flow of the piece - If it's too much, tell me to cut it out.
Wordiness- I do tend to use sometimes plain useless pieces to my writing. Don't worry - tell me to cut it out!
Changing of Nouns- I hate to use the people's names over and over again, but just how many times can you call the them a "young woman" before it gets redundant? Please inform me that I need to change some of these nouns or help me find some more to put there!
Commas- I use way to many commas, but that's mainly because I was taught to place a comma where a breath should be and, well, I take a lot of short breaths when speaking. Therefore, I almost always have too many commas.
Reading:
Spelling- I'm not the greatest speller on the planet, but if you tell me to look out for it, I will and I'll be able to pull out 98% of them. Typically this is because I tend to fill in the word if it's screwed up because normally we always get the first and last letter right.
Allusions- What I'm saying is, I'm good at detecting it. So if you'd rather keep me in the dark like a regular reader and not care to explain your allusions to me, I may be bombarding you with "What is this supposed to mean? It has no relevance!"
