Vamparino 's Beta Reader Profile
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since: 08-23-07, id: 1359934
Author has written 9 stories | RENT, Alice, 2009, Buffy: The Vampire Slayer, and Walking Dead.
β : Vamparino is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
As a betareader I am honest and thorough. I respect that you have your own vision to share with your audience, but I will communicate to you as best I can if your point is being lost or if your story seems scattered. The only thing I expect from the author is an open /br /br /

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If you have a typo, I will change it, but I will also highlight it so you know it was changed. I won't reword a sentence for you, but I will place a note in parenthesis with a suggestion or reason why it should be changed. I want to help the author and story grow, and that simply can not happen if I do everything for you and you never see what it is that was wrong, you follow? I am a big fan of proof reading more than once, because even in editing other mistakes can come up when you start changing plot points or deleting full paragraphs. Once you make your edits or changes, I prefer to read through it once more before you publish it. Not only to double check you as the author, but to double check myself as your BETA and make sure everything is as it should be. :)

My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
I am a human thesaurus. In my own writing, I hate nothing more than re-reading something and realizing I said the word 'hair' 10 times on one page. Examples? Soft locks, bright curls, pony tail, tendrils, etc. Little things like that can really enhance the way your story is imagined by the /br /br /

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Flow. If something is out of character/context I am very skilled at noticing it. The fandoms I have added myself to as a BETA I know backwards and forwards and can easily point out character flaws. Making sure the story is told in the correct tense/POV is also a pet peeve of mine. Things like this example: "She is listening to music, but then sat down and turned it off." These kind of errors do not get by me. /br /br /

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Emotions are also a strength of mine. I am good at keeping the tone of the story in line with where the author wants it to be. If you want to write an angsty love story about two people who can't get it right, but it reads as a bunch of lifeless dialogue, I can fix /br /br /

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Details and descriptions are probably my best skill. I LOVE me some detail!

My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
I am not that great at coming up with plot points and it usually takes a couple of read throughs to catch continuity. Dialogue structure is my weakest point by far, I can fix most basic grammatical errors and if something doesn't sound right to me, I'll figure out why.
Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
I prefer hurt/comfort or romance, only because I am the best at editing and writing those. But no genre is off limits, including slash. Some of my preferred pairings right now are:br /br /br /

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Daryl/Andrea or Daryl/Beth from the Walking Dead - in truth, I will BETA anything from this fandom br /br /br /

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Hatter/Alice from the SyFy Alice br /br /br /

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Tony Stark/Steve Rogers, Steve Rogers/Bucky Barnes, I'll consider any pairing from this fandom as I'm versed in both the films and comics from Marvel br /br /br /

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But I will absolutely look at anything from the series that I have listed below.

Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
I will read anything, there are really no topics that I am against and no pairing that I won't give an honest try.
Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Movie Alice in Wonderland, 2010
Tv Alice, 2009
Movie Avengers
Comic Avengers
Tv Bones
Movie Boondock Saints
Tv Buffy: The Vampire Slayer
Movie Captain America
Tv Firefly
Tv Ghost Whisperer
Comic Ironman
Tv Law and Order: SVU
Tv New Girl
Play RENT
Movie Titanic
Tv Walking Dead
Tv X-Files
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
General
Romance
Humor
Drama
Poetry
Adventure
Mystery
Horror
Parody
Angst
Supernatural
Suspense
Sci-Fi
Fantasy
Spiritual
Tragedy
Western
Crime
Family
Hurt/Comfort
Friendship