Poll: The Broken Yamanaka - Character Interaction with Kasumi Vote Now!
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Author has written 4 stories for Naruto, Lord of the Rings, and Bleach. Hi Everyone! I will try my best to write good fanfics and I will try and update as quickly and regularly as possible. if any of you have any suggestions of what I should do with my stories or any suggestions for new ones I am happy to listen. I will do a fanfiction for just about any fandom and if it is an anime then I love it! It may take me a while to get used to all of this. oh well I hope to get lots of messages and reviews from everyone - RogueTempest Prologue Problem - There have been some reviews, which I really appreciate, about the prologue and how it doesn't seem to make sense. I was going to save the main explanation for another couple of chapters but I will re-do the prologue again to make it more logical. Basically, it is a huge bit of superstition that the clan leader had a brown haired child as the only time it ever happened the child turned out to be 'evil' so the clan is saying that Ino is the daughter of Inoichi but Kasumi is the spawn of a devil or something like that as all clan heirs are blonde. I promise to do a proper explanation as planned and I promise that it will be soon. this is the ninja world, everything seems possible, even a devil child and such superstition. I'm going to stop doing the chapter notes and summaries here but instead I plan to answer the reviews at the bottom of each chapter. I was hoping to have only the story but I feel like I need to incorporate this so that I don't have everyone asking the same questions and instead answer them all at once. Thanks for the reviews and helping me to improve the story and telling me if things don't make sense as for me the whole thing makes sense but you guys don't know the whole story yet but also in some cases I plan to put an explanation in the next couple of chapters so sometimes patience can work as well for answers. I have been asked to make the chapters longer but I find it hard to get the time and/or inspiration and so if the chapters become longer the updates may take longer as well. I will always try and update in a reasonable time frame but sometimes life takes control and it can get a little difficult. Don't worry, if I plan to stop or take a break on a story I will let everyone know but I don't plan to anytime soon. :) |