Hullo, So this is my profile, feel free to look around :) I'll try to keep this short as I hate having long and overly useless profile pages that you have to scroll for about ten minutes to get to the actual written stories.

I'm NewExodus but you can call me Exo for short. Or Andrew. That's my real name :3

I'm 17 from the UK, Male and an avid reader, writer, actor & director. Funnily enough I hate script writing despite my love of Drama and English.

Currently studying English Lit & Lang, Law and Theology at a small school in a small town.

I've only recently started writing stories and posting them so my stories probably aren't as good as they could be but I do try.

I don't have a beta so any errors in my stories are my own and no one else's. If there's any errors within my stories send me a PM! I really hate having errors I don't notice!

If you have any questions about myself or my stories then send me a message and I'll be more than happy to respond :) General rule is that if I don't reply with 24 hours then I'll write you a one-shot or something as an apology.

Follow me on Tumblr! greenjacketwriter (If you do send me a PM on here or Tumblr and I'll follow you back :3)

Also for anyone interested in what I imagine Cara to look like: http:/// Exact fit, if not somewhat older!

The (first) Three Laws of Fanfiction

Rule One: If you do anything to increase the protagonist's power, or make their life easier, you must also amplify their opponent or add extra difficulties to their life. You can't make Frodo a Jedi unless you give Sauron the Death Star. Otherwise, even if it is well-written in all other ways, your story will suck because the reader will know to expect an unending string of easy victories, leading them to neither wonder or care about what happens next. The Mary Sue is not defined by her power being too strong, but by her challenges being too easily overcome.

Rule Two: Originality isn't easy, but it is simple: Just don't do stuff that's already been done. Even if all of your other characters are going to be absolutely true to canon, you still shouldn't have Harry Potter facing the same three challenges in the Triwizard Tournament because we've already read about them a thousand times. Put in three different challenges. Seriously. It can't hurt. Don't just go through the same events everyone has read about a thousand times before. Writing fanfiction lets you borrow the characters and the world; it doesn't exempt you from needing to surprise the readers and give them something new to read.

Rule Three: The premise of a story is a conflict and its resolution - someone with a goal, which they take action to achieve, and severe obstacles that they must replan to deal with (not just speedbumps along the way), and some ultimate resolution of the conflict in which the people and their situation have changed. "What happens if the Terminator is sent back in time to kill Voldemort" is not a story premise, just a fleeting mental image. "What happens if Harry Potter is under constant attack by shape-changing robot assassins" is still not enough of a premise. "Harry Potter is under constant attack by shape-changing assassins, and by the time he manages a spell to wall off the future he's already learned not to trust anyone" could maybe be a story's premise (though you wouldn't put that in the summary, or tell any reader that until the story had ended). You can change this plan later - but you should at least have one to start with.

So if you have a lovely mental image of Frodo with a lightsaber:

1. Figure out how to make his life more difficult, to make up for the lightsaber.

2. Decide what's going to happen differently in your fanfiction than in the other ones you've read.

3. Know what Frodo wants and what's going to get in his way, and have a plan for how it will all end.

Stories being written

The Heir Of Gellert Grindelwald- In Progress

What if an escaped, Ex-Dark Lord stole an abandoned boy-who-lived from the doorstep of his aunt's house and raised him as his own? What will happen when Albus Dumbledore comes across the adopted son of his enemy and teen love? And how will the Wizarding World fare against a Harry Potter who's been trained by a somewhat insane wizard and his adopted daughter?

This Love Can Save Us All (Temporary Title)- In Progress

Series of One shots set before and during The Heir Of Gellert Grindelwald. Read The Heir Of Gellert Grindelwald otherwise these short stories may not make any sense!