I'm an aspiring writer trying to improve her writing skills and find her style. I would appreciate some feedback and suggestions for improvement.

My favorite writers are J.K. Rowling, Rick Riordan, and J.R.R. Tolkien.

I will never write a Percy Jackson fanfic, mostly cause I will never be as sassy as Rick.

My stories will have one chapter update a week. I will apologize early for leaving nearly every chapter in a cliff hanger ;)