Who am I?

I am Mathew V. Dempsey and frankly sir I am made of win. If I am reviewing your story then I'm going to be brutally honest. I won't hold back and sugar coat it, If I think it's shit I will tell you so (and since my job is to review manuscripts for a publisher I know when something is shit)

That being said I do have some rather interesting ideas, mainly thought up in a happy haze of narcotics (sugar) beer (Pepsi, so again sugar) and Black Tar Heroin (...I got nothing)

contained below this line are some of my most brilliant (retarded) ideas. please read them and attempt them if you dare.

Challenge: Shinji the overlord.

Summary: Multiple cross over with Neon Genesis Evangelion and the Overlord series along with any other fantasy series you decide to splice into it. Shinji is taken at a young age by Gnarl and the minions (please note that he should still be able to speak Japanese so around six or seven should be a good age ) and raised as the next Overlord.

This time however Gnarl knows that because of the industrial age occurring outside the safety of the Netherworld, clockwork rifles have driven humans straight to the top of the power chain, they are subjugating every magical creature and control the world with a - literally - iron fist. Gnarl breaks the mold of the former Overlords and draws inspiration from the Samurai, a fast and agile warrior dealing precise death across the battlefield, maruading bands of minions won't be enough this time.

Should really feature and magically powerful Shinji who's fast but can't take a hit that well, the minions have to be there since it is an Overlord crossover but some of them should be upgraded by Shinji's magic, like sentient and cunning blues, massive troll like Browns, Balrog like reds and Master assassin greens.

That being said they should be in moderation, these should become generals in his army, along with the elven soldiers who are forced to work with him in order to fight the humans trying to exterminate them. The Elves should be standard fantasy, pale skinned and beautiful. Master archers and hunters with their magic being focused on druid like spells.

Evil races can also work with them as well. These can range from Orcs to goblins and Trolls.