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Joined 12-04-08, id: 1760872, Profile Updated: 11-08-10
Author has written 2 stories for Maximum Ride, and Pendragon.

Magic in the memory
Of your hand in mine
Magic in the music
My heart beating in time
Magic in the unknown
To renew that sense of awe
Magic in the art
That inspires us all
Hidden, Enchanting, Forever,
Elusive Magic

~ ~ By me, Elusive Magic (no stealing)

(My wonderful icon is from DeviantArt, by Sugargrl14. Not mine.)

About Me: I'm a teenage girl with a passion (okay, addiction) for writing. I am also the serial reviewer of fanfiction stories or stories on fictionpress, so if you're here about a review, know that I am being as honest as possible and offering constructive criticism to improve your work. Take my suggestions seriously, because I take you seriously, too.

My Writing: Short stories, poetry, fanfiction, chapter books - you name it. I write in real life as well as on fanfiction, and I've been writing seriously for over four years. Any genre is good if written well, though I do have a few favorite elements I love to see in a story. I can take criticism, and believe me, I will use it to improve my work. If I mess up, don't be afraid to call me out - it's the only way I'm going to get better.


Favorite Books and Authors (in no order)

Pendragon series by D. J. MacHale
Maximum Ride series by James Patterson
Chronicles of Narnia by C. S. Lewis
Harry Potter series by J. K. Rowling
Alex Rider series by Anthony Horowitz
Percy Jackson and the Olympians by Rick Riodan

Door to December by Dean Koontz
Dark Rivers of the Heart by Dean Koontz
City of Ember by Jeane DuPrau
Call of the Wild by Jack London
Inkheart (1) by Cornelia Funke
Prey by Michael Crichton

Still growing...


My Stories:

Who? (Published July 31, 2009) Angst/Romance ~ Summary: One-shot. Set after MR5. The flock is flying and M-Geeks attack. Fang hits his head a little too hard. Will he survive? But more importantly, will Max? Fax, better than it sounds. Rated (T) just to be safe. JP owns all. My first story, yay! Pretty good, worth reading.

Quotable Quotes! (Published September 20, 2009) Humor/General ~ Summary: A oneshot of my favorite quotes from the Pendragon books. Short and funny. Major Spoilers, obviously, but a notice before Soldiers of Halla quotes. R&R, enjoy! Funny, brings back memories.

Coming soon: An abandon story that I beta'd for, and now I'm taking it over. Artemis Fowl / Maximum Ride crossover. Doing some heavy editing...slow going, but it's gonna be great. =D


"The wastebasket is a writer's best friend." - Isaac Singer

"Don't tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass." - Anton Chekhov

"Words - so innocent and powerless as they are, standing in a dictionary. How potent for good and evil they become in the hands of one who knows how to combine them." - Nathaniel Hawthorne

"Every writer I know has trouble writing." - Joseph Heller

"Writers are not just people who sit down and write. They hazard themselves. Every time you compose a book, your composition of yourself is at stake." - E. L. Doctorow

"An author in his book must be like God in the universe; present everywhere and visible nowhere." - Gustave Flaubert

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No Longer Hatchlings by St. Fang of Boredom reviews
Takes place after FANG. Two Flocks, two destinies, one annoying Voice, and a whole lot of growing up to do. Throw in a kidnapping and you've got a teenaged bird-kid's worst nightmare.
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 11 - Words: 21,155 - Reviews: 156 - Favs: 62 - Follows: 57 - Updated: 1/10/2013 - Published: 5/1/2010 - Fang
Matryoshka by mixed.vinyl reviews
Half a year after their successful inception, Ariadne receives an offer of another job with the team, and just like the last time, she has no idea what she's getting into.
Inception - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 27 - Words: 83,216 - Reviews: 941 - Favs: 960 - Follows: 641 - Updated: 5/3/2011 - Published: 8/1/2010 - Ariadne, Arthur - Complete
Moments by ivyflightislistening reviews
Inspired by Mooncatcher's Here's How It Goes. Sentences describing brief clips of Maximum Ride and Fang's life. "He’s always the first to jump on her when her eyes glaze over with a goofy grin on her face, but she gets him back when he does the same."
Maximum Ride - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,556 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 2/28/2010 - Published: 2/23/2010 - Max, Fang - Complete
Iggy goes to Walmart by ChocolateMilk2 reviews
...and discovers that blindless does indeed have its downsides. MR2 crack, you have been warned.
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Humor/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 674 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 11 - Published: 2/17/2010 - Iggy, Gazzy/The Gasman - Complete
Solace by rootlessdream reviews
New horrors reveal themselves and Max begins to realize the end could be near for the Flock. What will she decide when the Voice asks her to do the unthinkable? Set after MR4. Fang/Max. Action/Adventure/Romance/Suspense. Extended Summary Inside.
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Romance - Chapters: 31 - Words: 42,988 - Reviews: 697 - Favs: 120 - Follows: 142 - Updated: 1/3/2010 - Published: 10/20/2008 - Max, Fang
Too Far? by StrangeSpark reviews
A series of events linked by one question: When has war gone too far? Hinted Rex/Ahsoka, rated for character death. Thanks to everyone for making this my most-viewed, most-favorited story!
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,512 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 33 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 9/16/2009 - Published: 7/3/2009 - Captain Rex, Ahsoka T. - Complete
What They've Done to Cedric by St. Fang of Boredom reviews
Wrote ths story for the Day of Anti-Hardwicke. Doesn't anyone ever consider what we put our poor characters through when we make movies of their books? Well, here's a look at the life of Cedric Diggory. Or is he Edward Cullen? Or is he Fang?
Crossover - Harry Potter & Maximum Ride - Rated: K+ - English - Parody/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,485 - Reviews: 70 - Favs: 41 - Follows: 12 - Published: 7/31/2009 - Cedric D., Fang - Complete
The Three Lives of Luke Castellan by greenconverses reviews
Thalia Grace encounters Luke Castellan's soul trice over five hundred years. She thinks it might be a conspiracy, but as they say, death cannot stop true love. It can only delay it a little while. Spoilers for The Last Olympian. Futurefic, Thalia/Luke.
Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 5 - Words: 18,274 - Reviews: 507 - Favs: 1,210 - Follows: 198 - Updated: 6/15/2009 - Published: 5/13/2009 - Luke C., Thalia G. - Complete
Family Therapy Cullen Style by vjgm reviews
Carlisle has had it with the children's constant bickering so he sends the Cullen's to family therapy. Suicidal Edward,Bella's fear of committment, Alice addicted to shopping, Rosalie's hostility, Emmett and Japer's gambling..who will survive? FUNNY
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 18 - Words: 69,221 - Reviews: 8500 - Favs: 7,767 - Follows: 1,857 - Updated: 5/15/2008 - Published: 11/10/2007 - Complete
Beautiful Secret by PixieGirl13 reviews
Its Percy's 3rd year at Camp Half blood. Everything is fine till a sphinx shows up at the border and demands for what was stolen from her to be returned and will eat anyone who comes in her way. Now Percy is in search for the thief. Better sum in my bio.
Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 7 - Words: 25,935 - Reviews: 46 - Favs: 20 - Follows: 9 - Updated: 4/9/2007 - Published: 1/26/2007 - Complete
Face Down by Twilight in my Eyes reviews
songfic. After SOF. By a twist of fate, the Flock has disbanded and Max is with Ari. Fang is in New York and comes upon the pair. He watches regretfully, as there isn't a lot he can do as Ari abuses Max. He must stop things. But how? Fax COMPLETE!
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 9,274 - Reviews: 46 - Favs: 29 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 1/27/2007 - Published: 1/21/2007 - Complete
A Little Place Called Home by nyanja14 reviews
Home is not where you live, but where they understand you. Post SOF. Max's and Fang's POV. Faxness. Rated T for Language and Dark Themes. Check out the sequel, A Little Person Called God.
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 30 - Words: 88,793 - Reviews: 1219 - Favs: 457 - Follows: 119 - Updated: 1/1/2007 - Published: 6/30/2006 - Max, Fang - Complete
Halflife: Fulllife Consequences by squirrelking reviews
John Freeman who is Gordon Freemans brother has to do what has to be done and help Gordon Freemen defeat the enemys
Half-Life - Rated: T - English - Horror/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 752 - Reviews: 630 - Favs: 493 - Follows: 69 - Published: 5/18/2006 - Complete
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Quotable Quotes! reviews
A oneshot of my favorite quotes from the Pendragon books. Short and funny. Major Spoilers, obviously, but a notice before Soldiers of Halla quotes. R&R, enjoy!
Pendragon - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,230 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 4 - Published: 9/20/2009 - Complete
Who? reviews
One-shot. Set after MR5. The flock is flying and M-Geeks attack. Fang hits his head a little too hard. Will he survive? But more importantly, will Max? Fax, better than it sounds. Rated just to be safe. JP owns all.
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,227 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 20 - Follows: 2 - Published: 7/31/2009 - Max, Fang - Complete