If you ask me why the heck I'm writing this, the answer is, I fell in love with KyuuHina after I had read The Love She Deserves and A Love That Saves, both by CrystallizedHina, then I found that hiphoplarry's story was up for adoption, guess the rest.

Just one thing, if you don't like then don't read.


The greatest nightmare of Konoha was out, the mighty Kyuubi no Yoko that was sealed inside the boy called Naruto, got out during the battle against Pain. But to understand the facts, we need to retreat a little in the time.

Flashback

The power of Pain was so great that even the new Toad sage couldn't take him down, so now he was pinned to the ground by chakra rods and Pain was near his body, about to strike him. But he was kicked by an indigo haired kunoichi, Hyuuga Hinata.

Upon seeing her figure standing a few meters away, Naruto began screaming at her, pleading her to go back, claiming that she was no match to the Akatsuki member. She cut him down, saying that she knew that fact, but also confessed that she would rather die than see him suffer, baring her feelings of love to the blonde, freeing him from the metal rods as well, but before she could take the last one, she was pushed by Pain, that made a killing strike at her, piercing her at her stomach.

In the depths of Naruto's mind, the Kyuubi entered in a state of rage by the sight of Hinata being killed in a brutal way, overwhelming the control that Naruto had over his power, taking his body and mind and almost breaking the seal.

Flashback end

The half freed Kyuubi was in a frenzied state, focused in killing Pain and succeeding in this task, but somehow Naruto managed to regain control and make the Kyuubi retreat to his jail. But now the village was destroyed, but some of the ninjas managed to survive, that included Hinata as well.

The village was recovering slowly, but surely, and the ninja returned to active duty, Tsunade even sent the Konoha Twelve in a mission, but made Hinata stay in the village. After their departure, Hinata was forced to take all of her personal belongings and now she was standing at the gates, with a mob in front of her, confused until the Hokage spoke:

"Hyuuga Hinata, you are hereby exiled from Konoha for causing Uzumaki Naruto almost lose control over the Kyuubi," said Tsunade angrily. "Do you have any last words?"

Hinata P.O.V.

I looked at the crowd just to see their angry glares and hateful shouts, I even saw my own family join them, claiming that I was weak, but I didn't see any of my friends. I shifted my bag a little and said good-bye with a surprisingly brave voice, then I walked away sadly, thinking to myself 'I'll show you all'.

I walked for hours since I left the village, without a clue about my destination. My feet were numb, I was tired as hell and to worsen my situation, I could sense that it was going to rain soon.

I still can't believe it. I never thought that it would happen to me. Maybe I deser- I felt rain drops on my body, so I activated my byakugan to find a shelter, spotting a small cave. When I had barely entered the cave it began pouring like crazy, so close... I decided to rest so I took my pack and laid my head over it and fell asleep, oblivious to the fact that a demon in my body is about to show itself to me.

'Hinata, soon you will show what really happened as well.'

Third person P.O.V.

Hinata had woken up in the middle of the night feeling so refreshed that she couldn't go back to sleep and the rain had stopped, so she decided to search for a placed to bathe. Seconds later she found a pond. There, she stripped down and dove in the water, any passerby would think that she was a nature spirit due to a wonderful body and her midnight blue hair. The cool water and the smell left by the rain made Hinata feel calm, after a while, she felt sleepy and went back to the cave. Right when she fell asleep again, she found herself in a giant room with barred windows and a cage that took a entire wall, that showed a pair of violet eyes and ten pure white tails.

"Where I am and who are you?" Hinata had asked hesitantly.

"I am the ten tailed demon, Juubi."

"… you're what?" Hinata was doubtful.

"Let me start from the beginning. As everyone knows, I was sealed inside the body of the Rikudou Sannin, and the legend says that my body and power was split in nine demons. But that isn't the truth, I just returned to Kami and I had to stay in Heaven until the purest child was born. The child was you, and I was sealed inside you."

"W-wow, but it changes all that we knew."

"Of course. And this is a lot to take in, but believe me when I say that in the future you will be the strongest being in this world."

"What do you mean?" asked Hinata.

"Anyone that has a demon in their bodies will fuse with them after a while and become that demon, and the previous one will pass on."

"So I will be the next ten tails?"

"Yes, and I will help you through your changes."

"Thanks, but it would ruin the Akatsuki's plans."

"It would never work by the way."

"Can you tell me your name and form? I can only see your tails and eyes."

"My name and form are your choice."

"What about a wolf?" after she said that, there was a bright light, when it died down, it revealed the most beautiful wolf that Hinata had ever seen, while it was mostly white, the underbelly, paws, the tips of its tails and a mark under its eyes were a light purple.

"You're so beautiful, can I call you Hikari?"

"It sounds lovely but you should wake up, you were sleeping for three days."

"How is that possible?!"

"Remember when I told you that you would change during our fusion? I'm just speeding it up," said Hikari while chuckling.

When Hinata woke up, the first thing that she noticed was the loudness of the birds. When she scratched her head, she felt a sharp pain, making her feel for what made the sensation. She felt animal ears which made her get scared and go to the spring to see her reflection. Hinata saw that she had ears and tail like Hikari and the same marks under her eyes. After this Hinata did what she did best, she fainted.


One week after Hinata was exiled.

Naruto p.o.v.

Me and the rest of THE Konoha 12 entered in our village. We all were in a mission but Hinata. We were quite confused, even Neji. Not that I really cared, it's just Hinata, the dark and weird girl. I can't believe that she is in love with me, I mean, she can't even look at me. And who would ever want a dull girl with a jacket as plain as her? I have my Sakura, my bright and beautiful Sakura.

As we walked to the Hokage tower, Neji said:

"I wonder why Hinata-sama didn't come with us in the mission."

"Hokage-sama probably thought that she was too weak to join us," sneered my Sakura, she's right.

"Don't talk that way about my teammate/cousin!" Neji and Kiba shouted while Shino just nodded in agreement.

"Yeah forehead! What makes you think that you can say that kind of stuff behind sweet Hinata?" yelled Ino.

"Whatever, Sakura-chan can say anything she wants," I said proudly.

"Shut up Naruto! But he's right, I can say what I feel like saying," Sakura said sassily.

'I can't believe that she just agreed with me. Soon she will see that I'm much better than that teme Sasuke!' I thought dreamly.

"Troublesome, can we go already?" asked Shikamaru.

Everybody just muttered a fine, but I was still thinking about Hinata, well she isn't my business. We all went to see granny and to report about the mission.

Third person P.O.V.

When they arrived at the tower, Sakura had knocked at the door but didn't get an answer so she knocked harder, breaking the door and angering a hungover Tsunade. "Why did you do that?!" "We came to report Tsunade-sama." Sakura was fearful. "Did you have to break the damn door?!" After she calmed herself she asked for the report. Neji decided to ask something that was bothering him. "Hokage-sama, I wanted to ask why Hinata-sama didn't go with us in the mission." Tsunade looked at the Hyuuga. "Remember when Pain attacked? She was the main reason that Naruto lost control, almost freeing the Kyuubi, so the Council decided to exile her a day after you went in your mission." Then she added in thought. 'Not that I had any say in the matter.' After that nobody said a word, except for one.

"WHAT?" screamed Naruto.


Well, I wasn't getting any reaction from the original author, so I took the matter in my own hands. Sincere apologies hiphoplarry. About Hikari, go to my profile to see the link. Any reader that sees this, don't take me wrong, the way I write can be confusing, but HELL! There are people that write worse than me! This chapter is just a rewrite from the original story. And the development is for the goddamn PLOT! Sorry if I offended someone. But I appreciate construtive criticism.