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Ben frond as he drove into the unground parking lot, at plumber's head quarter. To meet his new partners and he was running late.

When Ben arrived, Grandpa Max and Rook was waiting and as he got out of the car. Max told Ben that "you were no longer on his own schedule anymore". Ben flip the seat reached into the back and unclipped the car seat. Looked around at Max and said "I haven't been on my own schedule in a long time". As he pulled his little girl from the car and she flapped her little wings.

Ben laughed and said "go to greatgrandpa Max" let her go. She flap her way to Max. she laughed all the way as she went to Max. Rook looked at the little necrofriggian half breed She was a cute little thing.

She had Ben's brown hair and green eyes color and she could blink her eyes and excapet for the wings, antenna and skin color and the long fingers she did look human.

She giggled at Max untill she saw Rook. She then went intangible to only become tangible agen behind Ben's back.

Tell me what you think so far.