Hi this is my frist story that I have ever written so hope you like it

*...* thinking

\.../ mind link

"..." talking

Atem's POv

Once upon a time there was a prince that lived in a castle, but he was rude, mean, and heartless. Then there was a boy who needed somewhere to stay for the night, and soon the boy came upon a castle. He knock on the door, and a minute later the door opened. The person who opened the door was a teenager boy who had gravity defiant hair that was tri-colored so at the end of his hair he had crimson tips, he had blond bangs, blond strips of his hair going up, and the rest of his hair was black, and his eyes was crimson, and he looked about thirteen years old.

I was shocked that this teenager looked like me but the only different is that the teenager was pale, and I was tan.

"What do you want" the teenager said

"Is it ok if I stay for the night from the cold, and in return i will give you this rose" I said

"No it is not ok " the teenager said and closed the door.

With that I turned into my real form but I still looked like myself, I just had light around me, and I was floating in the air. I busted the door open, and I saw that the teenager was shocked at what he saw.

"Who are you" the teenager said

"I am a wizard, and my name is Atem, and who are you" I said

"I am the prince of this castle, and my name is Yami. If I have known that you were a wizard I would have not acted like that I am sorry. It's just that you looked like eleven years old so I thought that you were just another kid." Yami said

I am mad at Yami *ok yeah sure I am eleven, but this teenager does not need to be rude to other people so I will teach him how to love because the person you love can change you.*

"Yami you are rude, mean, and most of all heartless, and you need to learn how to love so I will put a curse on you. The curse will turn you into a beast, but it will only turn you into a beast when you are angry. The curse will last until you fall in love and the person loves you back, but when the last petal falls, and you have not found the person you love or you have, but the person does not love you back then the curse will stay forever." I said

I was about to leave but turned around

"I will give you this mirror that lets you see whatever you want to see, and all you got to do is say what you want to see." I said

I left with Yami just standing there shocked at what he just heard.

ok I am done with this chapter I hope you liked it

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