OK, so I decided that now that my story is officially a year old (11/13/14) and since I recently re-read over it and found emNumerous/em mistakes, I would go through and revise/edit the story... so just a few changes here and there, not really anything new, unless this is the first time your reading it in which case, Enjoy!
A gust of air blew through the trees and grass as the boy rode fast on his horse, following the annoying blue fairy named Navi. She was constantly yelling, "HEY, LISTEN!" when there was nothing to be heard. Or sometimes she would call, "LOOK OUT!" when he was fighting, but already knew what he was going to do.
'Where is that dang cave at?' he thought slowing his horse, Epona, to a stop. 'Was it to the right or the left of the statue thingy?' He looked at the huge statue of a cucoo that some idiot had made in their spare time. 'Ughh, I hate those things.' He thought, shuddering as he pulled his map out of his pouch to see which way the cave was. 'Right.' He put the map back in his pack, grabbed the reigns to his horse, steered her to the right and kept riding.
"Hey, Listen!" Navi yelled "I don't think th-"
"I don't fricking care what you think!" He snapped finally having enough of her high-pitched voice. He whipped a jar out of his pack, one that he had poked holes in earlier that day just he got annoyed of her, and caught her in it, putting it in back in his pouch after tightening the lid of the jar. 'Finally,' the boy sighed with relief 'freedom.' The rest of the ride was peaceful and quiet.
The boy had finally reached the cave, dismounted his horse, and walked up to the cave with the reigns in hand. That was when he noticed the cave was glowing. He pulled out his map again just to make sure it was the right cave. 'It's the same one that's on the map.' He realized matching up the markings 'yet the map on the cave isn't glowing…' Looking from the map to the cave with a quizzical face he pulled out his letter he had received from the Princess. The boy read the letter over and over again.
"Dear friend,
Monsters in Ordon village have been attacking and leaving few unharmed. The monsters have been traced back to a cave about twenty minutes, on horse, away due east. Please find this cave and put an end to the killing of my people.
- Your Princess"
'Nope doesn't say anything about glowing.' He paused thinking a bit more. 'It might just be the monsters the letter talks about though.' The boy put his stuff back into his pack, took out his sword, and walked forward into the cave. As he walked through the cave little golden dots pierced his skin, gentle at first but then harder, and harder. Soon the pain was unbearable and the boy passed out.
Someone's POV ~
He was walking through the fields thinking about things, just random things, that had no importance what so ever. Things like, what would happen if Villagers became smart, or if sheep mooed and cows bahed, silly things that popped into his head. He was in the middle of thinking these things when he heard a loud thump behind him. He pulled out his Budder sword preparing for an attack, and he saw a boy lying slumped over on his collapsed horse, while a dog with a blue collar whined and nudged the boy.
He ran towards the boy and checked for broken bones, then woke him up. The boy jumped and slashed at the man with his sword, but the man blocked with his own. "Hey! Calm down I saw you slumped over your horse and came to check on you." The man said genuinely concerned.
"Oh," The boy replied looking ashamed. "Sorry."
"No problem. Oh by the way, name's Skythekid. Sky, for short." Sky said smiling as if he had not almost been sliced in half by the boy.
"Link." He answered. "Um… where am I?" He asked looking around for the first time, noticing nothing was curvy but made of what looked like colored crates or blocks. And on that note so was Sky. There was nothing round about him. A purple flash ran across his eyes and he noticed the amulet around Sky's neck. 'Interesting. I wonder why it's glowing.'
"What do you mean where are you?" Sky asked, obviously puzzled. Then he started laughing like it was a joke. He glanced at the boy and then realized he wasn't joking. The boy was genuinely confused. "You're in Minecraft."
Shea: Hope you enjoyed, will revise all and other chapters (Not necessarily in order though...) write in the reviews what you think of he new style or PM your thought if your unable to leave a review, as always Peace, Love, and Tacos!