Unseen Emotions: Rewritten

Disclaimer: I don't own the Kingdom Hearts characters, but I do own all locations, the storyline, and the original characters.

For Warnings, Spoilers, and Plot see earlier chapters! Thanks!

Pairings: Axel x Riku

A.N. A request from a reader; an additional scene following Part One. After healing from his surgery and regaining his sight, Riku gives Axel a taste of what it's like experiencing sensations while blind.

At this point in their relationship, they're experimenting around with BDSM and various kinks! If you aren't into bondage, dirty talk, pet names, masochism, or edging, be forewarned!

Part Two of Two! Enjoy!

Rewritten: Part Two

Axel watched his fiancée as he crossed the room towards the bed, the shadows cast across his naked body catching his curves and shifting as he moved, the older boy eyeing the silk blindfold he was holding with curiosity. He couldn't move, his wrists bound and secured above his head, tied to the headboard with strong, soft rope that wasn't coming undone anytime soon. "So...you're saying...you want me to submit to you, completely." Riku nodded slowly, taking his time as he approached. "To...consent to sensory deprivation, as a way of experiencing how you felt when you were blind?"

"Exactly." Riku grinned from ear to ear, watching the red-headed boy as he knelt at the edge of the bed. "I want to show you what it was like. Can I? Please?"

Axel searched his teal-blue eyes and chuckled softly, flexing against his restraints. He hadn't realized what he was getting himself into tonight when he'd agreed to play the role of the submissive, but he had to admit he was intrigued, and more than that he trusted Riku endlessly. He would give the boy anything he wanted, whatever he asked. Still, for this to work, he had to say so aloud. He had to give his fiancée his full consent for this to continue. From the eager excitement shining in Riku's eyes, there was no way Axel could even consider turning him down. "Of course you can. You know I trust you with my life, Riku…" He arched against the sheets, leaning up as much as he could, asking for a kiss. The pale blonde smiled happily and dipped down to comply, humming softly when their lips met gently, moving against one another with a slowly stirring passion. After a long moment Riku pulled back, tucking some of his hair behind an ear shyly and holding up the blindfold again with an impish grin.

"Alright then. Let's get started." His voice was pitched low, this touch soft and movements steady. Axel shuddered at the power dynamic exchange, an unfamiliar scene, unused to seeing his cute, sweet lover so worked up and ready to incite mischief. Giving up control was not something Axel had experienced often with past lovers, and this was the first time he'd ever gone this far with Riku. He was versatile, but tended to have more submissive partners, and therefore had the most experience playing the dominant role. He was happy Riku was comfortable experimenting and exploring with him, learning what excited him and discovering his kinks, and if this would lead to a deeper connection with the boy he loved he would do it gladly whenever Riku asked him to. He felt vulnerable under his gaze, and it was steadily setting his nerves ablaze, his heart fluttering in his chest. Axel watched the younger boy as Riku shifted to straddle his bare hips, slowly reaching forward to cover his face with the silk cloth, watching those vivid teal eyes disappear from view as he was blinded by his lover. Riku's voice greeted his ears as he was enveloped in darkness, the boy's tone soft, tender and sweet. "I want you to know what it felt like, when you made love to me for the first time." He pulled his hands away once the blindfold was secured, and Axel exhaled softly as he felt his fiancée glide his hands down his chest, rocking his hips down to tease him further. "I want you to share every experience you gave to me, I want you to feel how every touch, every word set me on fire. It was amazing, Ax...the way you so easily took control and gave me everything I needed, even before I knew what to ask for..."

"Riku…" Axel whispered reverently, breath caught on a moan as his lover rocked his bare ass down against his waist, his cock already rigid and dripping precum, sliding easily between the boy's cheeks as if it were made to fit there. Riku laughed softly, enjoying himself as he teased the boy beneath him, humming softly and rubbing up and down his chest, teasing his nipples with his fingertips, toying with the piercings adorning his skin and tugging at the silver hoops gently. "Fuck-" Axel swore softly, rocking his hips up and clenching his fists, tugging against the restraints as pleasure seared up his spine from those small touches. Everything felt more intense, his mind focusing on each sensation with hyperawareness, his heartbeat loud in his ears. "Please baby, I want you so badly…" He felt Riku shifting and tilted his face up when he felt lips meet his own, kissing the younger boy slow and deep, drinking in his lover's soft moans.

He pulled back a few moments later, returning to tugging at the small rings and causing Axel to cry out and arch against the sheets, moaning low and deep as his nipples were abused mercilessly. They'd played with this particular sensation before, but never like this, and Axel's already sensitive nipples were thoroughly enjoying the rough treatment, his cock twitching defiantly against his lover's ass. "Patience… You look so damn pretty like this, it's insane…" Riku's voice was a bit shaky, and Axel could feel the precum slicking their skin where it was dripping from Riku's cock and spreading across his lower stomach and Riku's inner thighs.

"Ride me baby, I wanna be inside you…" His voice a bit more desperate that he'd expected it to be, Axel sighed with relief when Riku moved back a bit, lifting his hips and repositioning them so he could guide Axel's arousal to where they both desired, picking up on the way Riku's breath hitched as he started to slide down onto his hard cock, sliding into him fully in one slow gliding motion. Riku must have stretched himself before they'd begun. "So fucking hot, Riku… Fuck me…"

The blonde didn't need to be told twice. Moving on trembling knees and clenching his thighs for balance the younger boy started to move, his palms planted firmly against Axel's chest as he built a quick rhythm between them. The sound of their skin meeting was a slick, wet sound, the slaps echoing sharply off the walls of Axel's bedroom. "Oh god...yes… You feel so good baby! Oh my god! Yes…"

Axel would never tire of hearing his lover call out for him, shivering pleasantly as his voice washed over him, ringing in his ears. The wet slaps as his ass met muscled thigh, the prick of his fingernails against his chest, the way his sweat trickled down his neck and chest and dripped onto the tensing body below sporadically...it was enough to make Axel climax with a sharp snap of his hips, moaning loudly as he strained against his bindings and released deep inside his lover, Riku riding him through his completion. He kept riding him still, even after Axel was finished cumming, knowing if he continued he would easily work his fiancée back up again, and it took only a few minutes of riding him to have Axel fully hard again, moaning loudly and panting hard beneath the boy riding him, cursing mindlessly as Riku took control. One of the hands planted against his chest moved and Riku's weight shifted, and with the way his voice pitched higher and his movements became more frantic Axel could tell he was touching himself. "That's it baby, you're so hot Riku. You gonna cum for me baby? I wanna hear you begging for me…"

"Ah yes, please! I wanna cum Daddy, please let me!" Falling back into their usual roles in the height of his pleasure, Riku shuddered and clenched around Axel's cock tightly, jerking himself faster as he continued to bounce. "Please I'll be such a good boy, I'll be so good for you… I love feeling you inside me, Daddy… Please let me cum…!"

"Not yet baby, you can last longer than this, I know you can." He rocked his hips up into his lover, grinning at the power Riku was giving him despite being the one beneath him, "Keep riding me, yeah that's good. Can you slow down for now and edge yourself for me?"

"Y-Yes…" Riku whined softly as their rhythm changed, rolling his hips instead of bouncing, pressing Axel deep inside and clenching around him as he fisted his cock, his hand shifting to balance behind him on the older boy's thigh, nails digging in as he continued jerking off. "A-Ah fuck… I should have worn a cockring… Mmh, Daddy!"

"You don't need a ring to edge yourself baby, I know you can do this for me." He couldn't see Riku on top of him, but he could just imagine what he must look like, his pale skin flushed pink, sweat trickling down his neck, nipples perked and cock weeping as he stroked himself to the precipice of climax. All for Axel. "You're in control, baby. You can do this. Just breathe and come back from the edge."

"Oh god...oh god…! Ah!" Riku whined and rolled his hips, muffling his voice as he bit his bottom lip, precum dripping from his swollen cock as he took his hand away and clenched down around Axel's cock, panting hard as his body convulsed and he backed down from that searing high, trembling with effort. Axel groaned and rocked his hips up into him, whispering soft praises as Riku whined and begged again. "Please Daddy, I wanna cum for you… Please let me…?"

"You're such a good boy for me, doing what you're told." He flexed his fingers, tugging against the ropes and huffing softly when he realized once again he definitely wasn't able to break free. He would just have to convince Riku to follow his words without being able to touch him. This was hot beyond belief, unable to see and only able to feel and hear his fiancée as he struggled to maintain control of his body. "We aren't done yet, I want you to ride me again until you're almost cumming. Let me feel you on the edge. You can do it, baby, come on…"

"Ah, Ax…" Riku did as he was told, starting to move again, quickly building a fast rhythm so slaps were once again filling the room, the boy's voice strained and pitching several octaves higher as he began climbing towards climax. "Yes! Yes! Daddy! Feels so good…!"

"Both hands where I can feel them, Riku. No touching your cock. Just ride." He shivered as the younger complied, sweaty palms pressing against his chest and sliding up and down lightly as he moved, Axel meeting his hips each time with sharp jolting thrusts that had his own cock throbbing with the need to release once again inside the mewling boy. "That's it, just like that baby. You're gonna make me cum…"

"Me too! Me too, please!" He whined desperately, digging in his nails and hiccuping softly, Axel moaning loudly as he realized Riku had started crying, overstimulated from edging.

"Not yet baby, you're being so good for me, I'm gonna make sure you get your reward, just keep riding me." Breathing so hard he felt dizzy, Axel arched his back and let out a loud shout as he came again, moaning and fucking up into Riku even as the younger boy cried softly and continued bouncing on his cock, Axel praising him again, shivering from the intensity of his orgasm. "You're being so good to me, that's my good boy. You make me feel so good. I love you so much."

"L-Love you t-too, Daddy…" Riku sniffed softly, hiccuping again and shifting one of his hands, wiping at his wet cheeks, Axel panting softly and stilling his movements, basking in afterglow while Riku clenched around his half-hard cock. "W-Was I a good boy f-for you?"

"You are always a good boy for me, Riku. Can you come here and kiss me?" He leaned up and met his fiancée's lips, kissing him gently, the smaller boy pressing close to his chest and rocking against him needily, his hard cock trapped between them. "Good boy, Daddy loves you so much, Riku. You did such a good job riding me. You wanna free Daddy's hands so he can hold you?"

"M-Mmh-hmm…" Riku hummed shakily, his hands moving up to loosen the ropes wrapped around the headboard, and as soon as Axel had enough slack to do so he slipped one wrist free, untying the other as Riku stayed pressed close to his chest, shivering when the older boy finally wrapped both arms around him. He kept the blindfold on, waiting for Riku to tell him when he could remove it, kissing the top of his head and rubbing his back in slow, steady passes, soothing him even as he rocked up into his warmth. Riku's voice was soft, almost dreamy, undoubtedly exhausted from riding so vigorously and edging twice with no release. Eventually his breathing evened out and he stopped crying, and he lifted his head up enough that Axel could kiss his lips again, whispering softly between kisses, "Please, Daddy…"

"Alright, let me reward you for being so good. Can you get on your knees for me?"

Humming a soft affirmation, Riku moved from Axel's warm, muscled chest and shifted into position, the older getting to his knees and guiding himself to the right place by touch alone. He knelt behind Riku, reaching out and pushing his upper back gently so the boy bent forward, pressing his chest to the pillows and widening his thighs so Axel could fit against him easily. The older boy took a moment to smooth his hand along Riku's spine and squeeze his pert ass, kneading gently and listening to the soft muffled sounds his fiancée made, before gripping his hips with both hands and pressing into Riku's tight heat once more. He slipped inside all the way to the base until he was fully sheathed, flush with the blonde boy's ass, Riku moaning loudly and rocking back against him.

Axel didn't wait for Riku to tell him it was alright to move, starting a fast, rough pace and thrusting into him with a loud slap each time, Riku crying out loudly and begging for more. "Yes! Yes! Ah yes, I'm gonna cum! Please, Ax…! I want it! Please…!"

Hearing his name instead of his chosen pet name signaled that Riku was nearly at the end of his rope. If he didn't get to cum soon, he wouldn't be able to do much of anything else, reaching the threshold of pleasure turning into pain. So finally, Axel relented, moving one hand from gripping Riku's hip to wrapping around his weeping cock, the younger boy practically screaming as he met each of Axel's thrusts and bucked into his hand, allowing himself to finally tumble over the edge at his fiancée's whispered words, "Cum for me, baby. You can cum."

"Axel! A-AH!" He threw back his head and came hard against the sheets, spilling over Axel's hand in excess, waves of pent up orgasm washing over him as he was finally gifted what he wanted all along. "Thank you, thank you...ah, fuck…"

"Easy, baby...just breathe…" Continuing to stroke him through his orgasm, milking his sticky cock, Axel slowly shifted to lay down at his lover's side and gather him into his arms, Riku a panting, shuddering mess of electric nerves against his chest. He kissed his forehead and temple, leaning down to kiss his lips, slow and tender, Riku whining softly and reaching up to untie the blindfold keeping their eyes from meeting. The dark silk fell away, and Axel was captivated by the teal blue gazing up at him, half-lidded and hazy with satiated lust. "There's my boy…" Axel said softly, grinning cheesily and dipping down to kiss Riku again, the blonde giggling softly and wrapping his arms around his fiancée's neck, keeping him close.

"That was...really intense…" Riku said softly, his breathing still uneven, his body shivering with the aftermath of coming down from such a high. Axel reached over and grabbed a handful of sheets, tugging them over their naked bodies, reaching over to the side table and grabbing a water bottle, offering it to the younger boy.

"Yeah it was, that was amazing, love. You did such a good job. That was...unlike anything I had experienced before, the blindfold made me feel...everything." Riku sat up a bit, taking a drink from the water bottle and smiling at his lover as he described the experience. "The detail of each moment seemed highlighted, it made me focus on things I guess I'd never really noticed before."

"Like how good it feels to be inside me?" Riku teased, Axel chuckling and kissing him when he was done taking another drink.

"More like the way your voice changes when you start calling me Daddy and begging to cum, you damn brat."

Sticking out his tongue in mock defiance Riku laughed and tried to escape Axel wrapping him in his arms and tickling his sides, screeching giddily and kicking at the sheets. They settled down again after a few moments, kissing softly, Axel threading his fingers through Riku's long pale locks while the other boy pet at his fiery mane, watching him with an expression Axel couldn't quite read. "What is it? Are you okay?" He was always careful with Riku after they shared a scene like this, watching for any signs of subdrop. "Do you want to take a bath? Or I could make you something to eat if that sounds good?"

"Both of those things sound nice. It's just…" He reached up, cupping Axel's cheek, searching his eyes with a soft, relieved smile. "I'm so thankful for everything you've given me. You sheltered me, believed in me, gave me back my sight, proposed to me…" He leaned closer, burying his face against Axel's chest and nuzzling for a moment before turning his face to the side so he could speak. "Thinking about spending the rest of my life with you. It's...amazing. I can't wait to get married to you."

Axel hummed softly, petting up and down Riku's back and inhaling against his messy hair, savoring his scent. "I am so happy to know that you're just as excited as I am. I cannot wait to share the rest of my life with you. I want nothing more than to bring you infinite happiness. You have all of my heart." He found Riku's hand and squeezed gently, thumb brushing against his ring finger and leaning down to kiss his fiancée again, Riku closing his eyes and humming against his lips. He had found the bright light that had once been hidden in darkness. He would never let that light go out.

Part two of a two-part rewrite for my dear reader Dax-TheBurningDancerOfFlames!

I hope you enjoyed! Thanks for reading!