This story has been re-written into a far higher quality than what it was. The first half of the story has been changed almost completely while the other half of it remains the same, but the quality of the writing has been upped. I would appreciate it if people would let me know what they think has been improved upon or was better in the original version and what they think of the original vs the re-write, just so I can get an idea on what I am doing right and continue to use it for future fanfictions.