Hey guys! Here's a little snippet of my next story! this comes from a roleplay my wife (Kat_with_Shamrocks) and I did, but I have rewritten it so this all my own writing! just so you know but I highly suggest you look at her stories as well!

This story will contain drugging and underaged sex and other stuff so turn back now if those squick you out!

"Open."

Acting on autopilot in the stifled atmosphere rank with disinfectant and tension, Ivan slid his mouth open wide, and, predicting the nurse's next command, took the liberty of enlarging his fangs, his pale lips stretching back into a snarl to accommodate the addition. The nurse hummed in silent approval, tipping his head back to better examine his fangs with the lights overhead before tsking with annoyance. Ivan felt his cheeks heat as his father's stare narrowed into a dark and firm glare. "Ivan… I feel I should almost reprimand you on being such a good rule follower."

"Excuse me?" the teenaged vampire asked, relaxing his jaw as the lady nurse moved away with a tut, scratching down a messy note onto her clipboard as she went to gather some materials for the next phase of the checkup.

"Your virginal coating is still completely intact. I take it you use blood supplements?" the nurse continued, to which his father nodded stiffly, Ivan fidgeting awkwardly on the reclining hospital chair. The woman lifted up a blunted tool, checking it's cleanness before taking a little baggie and a wipe as she moved back over to Ivan. "I know the law states that all vampires must wait until they are twenty before finding a blood bank, but I'll have to write you an exception."

Ivan winced uncomfortably and tried not to move so much as the nurse carefully chipped away at his left fang, the shavings falling into the bag until she had a decent enough sample. "Your virginal coat looks highly acidic… You most likely have some kind of high level venom. But, given your family history," she nodded to Ivan's father curtly, meeting no response from the older vampire. "That is not very surprising."

"Why does he need an exemption," the man grunted through grit teeth, his fangs glinting from thinly frowning lips. The nurse shuddered, zipping up the bagged sample as she moved away again and let Ivan dab at his fang with the wipe. "The law says he has five more years left before he gets a blood bank."

"Yes, but his fangs will begin to rot if the virginal coat is not removed," the nurse explained with a sigh, shaking her head as she moved away to pick up a needle. "We normally don't have to worry about this sort of thing since most vampires your age have already given their first bite."

"It's against the law," Ivan murmured darkly, jolting when his sideways glance met his father's glare. He remained quiet though, letting the nurse tip his head back again.

"Regardless. Laws can be broken if it's for your health. Should you enter a bloodlust, you'd be a danger to society, and the laws against that overrule the laws about blood banks. I'll give your father a list of clinics for you to choose from, there are plenty of misfi- I mean, people, who will gladly become a bank for a high level like you," she smiled sweetly, but Ivan could tell from the sour pucker in her cheeks that she did not mean her words kindly. Regardless, he simply watched her obediently as his father regarded them both cooly. "Now tip your head back, I need to get at your venoglands."

Ivan's world seared with pain as the woman jabbed his neck with her needle, his toxic venom suctioned out his body in the most uncomfortable way possible directly from his full glands. His vision blackened out, the last thing he remembered being his father staring with an icy cold look of disapproval and disappointment in his eyes.

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