Story:

Tawog American music special by Agent BM

Star Rating: 0 out of 4 stars

Review: We are given, yet again, another story from fan fiction "fan" Agent BM. This story is as bad as anything else he has written. I'm a fair man, but this streak keeps going on and on. What's bad about this story? Let me tell you:

This story goes in (out of nowhere and unexplained) an annual music festival where the first song is a corny kids song when they have no talent and just want to do a sing-a-long. Where are also introduced a recurring original character named "lex" and has happened to be misspelled (no surprise there).

Later, we are given a visit that surprises us that the singer was the author. (He gives us no explanation where and how he gets there.) He refers to himself as Mr. Agent BM, which makes me laugh. He sings, again, and they are impressed.

How does that look like? Not once have I mention in this review that it was a song-fic, since I didn't need this as a reason on why it's bad.

The "so-called writer" writes horribly, no act of story telling, brings a useless OC, and accomplishes nothing. This is a spat to music and it gives readers the finger.

Summary: When people witness trolls saying one's story is bad, out of spite, and say it's bad. But when they say stories like this is bad, you will look like an idiot if you disagree. Agent BM makes himself look like a man with talent, but he is a half-wit writer who owns no talent and should hide in shame. I want him to go to school and get straight A's in English (or put some damn periods with good grammar and plot structure).

I review a story every day, whether it's new or old, I bring criticism to stories that should be praised or bury the ones that should be dead.

~ I'm fan fiction critic/reviewer Henry Peters.