Okay so this is my first fanfic EVER, so please be nice. I have been quietly obsessing over this show for a while and I think it's time I finally contributed, especially since it's such a small fandom.
I decide to kinda re-write the last episode, Knights, because the ending sort of annoyed me. Frankly I am getting a little sick and tired of Chance and Co always getting away because of some convenient plot device.
What do you guys thank?
Anyway this is my take on how Knight should/could have ended. It begins right after Charlemagne arrives.
"Commandant Charlemagne let me fight him, I can beat him".
"NO! You've already done your part, whether you win or lose, Chase Suno is mine".
"Yes…ma'am".
Beyal's mind raced as Charlemagne and Chase began to battle. He had to find a way to get them out of this tricky situation before lock powered down. He glanced around looking for an escape, but seeing only a mass of S.T.O.R.M soldiers.
A loud crashing bought Beyal's attention back to the fight and he wondered if he should help. His hand slipped into his coat pocket as he reached for Glowblade.
He was so focused on the fight that he did not see the two guards creeping up behind him until one had clamped a hand around his mouth and the other had relived him of his cores.
Chase continued to battle Charlemagne until the inevitable happened. Chase gritted his teeth as Lock began to glow then returned to his core.
"You are mine Chase Suno, hand me your cores and surrender, there is nowhere for you to run my guard block every exit". Chase glanced around quickly, confirming that she was right.
"Every exit on the ground maybe", Chase said with a grin. "EVO, launch". A burst of blue light later, Chase was climbing aboard the bird like Monsuno.
Evo screeched and took to the skies, circling around the area. Below them Charlemagne laughed, "Predictable as ever Chase Suno". Chase frowned, wondering what she meant.
"You may escapes if you wish but would you really leave your friend behind", she laughed cruelly and Chase knew he was stuck. Below him and just behind Charlemagne was Beyal, restrained by two guards.
"Alright Charlemagne I surrender, just let Beyal go". Once more Charlemagne laughed, "Sorry Suno but this is not up for negotiation, either you come down here now or I have my guards throw your friend of a cliff".
Chase's eyes narrowed with worry as the guards marched Beyal closer to the edge of the cliff. "Evo, land", he commanded. The Monsuno gave a small whine of worry and Chase patted him for comfort.
Once on the ground he held out his hand, "Evo…returned". The creature glowed then returned once more to its core. "Search him, make sure you get every core and any other possible weapons he may have".
Chase ground his teeth as he was roughly searched by Charlemagne's lackeys. His hands where then grabbed and cuffed behind his back. He looked up to see Beyal receiving the same treatment.
They locked eyes and Beyal sighed, "I am sorry Chase, perhaps if I had not hesitated so long-"
"Don't apologize Beyal, this wasn't your fault".
"Quiet prisoners", one guard said, pushing chase in the direction of a near-by S.T.O.R.M vehicle. Beyal followed behind Chase, tempted to try and reason with the guards, but knew it would be futile.
In hopeless depression the two climbed into the back of the van. They sat next to each other, while armed guards sat on either side and opposite them. Beyal closed his eyes and began to meditate while chase stared at the wall, wondering if the others were in the same trouble he was.
Back at the cave
"Yeah", Bren shouted as he thrust his fist into the air.
"Good on 'ya mate", Dax smiled and patted him on the back. Even Jinja was laughing. But a static voice over a walkie talkie quickly ruined their mood. "Pull back…I repeat, pull back".
Their opponents hurried up, running out of the cave. Confused, Dax, Jinja and Bren raced out after them. They watched as the three teens were hauled up by rope ladders into a S.T.O.R.M helicopter.
"I guess that means we won't be having another game", Bren sighed.
"Ah com'on mate, I'll give it another go. Can't have you hoggin' all those high score's". Bren's face lit up happily as he and Dax sat down to have another game.
Jinja glared at them and the two looked up, "What!" they asked in unison. "Don't you two thinks it's a little weird that they just ran off like that"?
Bren shook his head, "No doubt Chase kicked their butts and now their running off home like losers", he laughed and held out his hand to Dax for a high five. But Dax ignored him, Jinja's words had got him thinking, "Maybe she's got a point glasses".
Jinja nodded and folded her arms, I say we go and find Chase and Beyal, even if they are on their way back here, we can meet them halfway". Dax nodded and stood up, "alright Princesses, lead the way".
Bren sighed and stood to, "I guess that means we won't be having another game then", he muttered to himself as he trudged, unhappily, along behind Dax and Jinja.
Inside S.T.O.R.M vehicle
Commandant Charlemagne and commander Trey sat quietly next to each other as they were driven back to S.T.O.R.M headquarters. Trey turned to his commanding officer, a question on his lips.
"Commandant Charlemagne, you have Chase Suno in your custody so why did you bring the other one. We have no need for him, he is merely a waste of space and resources."
Charlemagne turned to Trey, anger in her eyes, "Are you questioning me commander Trey?"
"No, no I just-"
"Suno's are stubborn, commander Trey. Having the monk child in our possession will ensure that Chase Suno is compliant with my commands".
She turned, looking back at the road ahead of them, "Do you understand now, commandeer Trey".
Trey dropped his head, clenching his fists, "Yes, Commandant Charlemagne".
They two fell into silence, and that is how it stayed until they arrived at S.T.O.R.M Headquarters.
So what did you guys think, I hope it was okay. Please review as it would mean the world to me. I do hope to continue this so be on the lookout for more.