Hey guys.
I've had a massive block on how to get this to go where I want. So I have decided to rewrite it. I have re-planed the story and have given it a new title: inicipiens fati.
The beginning few chapters will be similar but there are changes and since I have planned the plot I should be able to make regular posts.
Thanks to everyone that reviewed, followed and favourited the story and I have really appreciated the feedback that you left, hopefully this has made incipiens fati better than Frater Fatum.
I have posted the first chapter of incipiens fati, and I will take Frater Fatum down in a weeks time.
Hope you enjoy it.
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