Guest 9/18/13 . chapter 12

what a piece of shit of a story the way you deal whit tom it pure garbage, for cry sake he even told beca they had sex on there date and than everything just fine and dandy . you are truly a bad writer.

TO THE GUEST THAT HATED THIS STORY SO MUCH THAT HE/ SHE HAD TO READ THE STORY ALL THE WAY THROUGH BEFORE LEAVING A HATE REVIEW:

I would like to start this off by saying I value everyone's opinion because everyone is entitled to have an opinion. So even if yours was horribly spelled and the grammar of your review was absolutely awful, I still respect your opinion.

Secondly, did you miss the other 2000 or so stories you could have read while you were wasting your time reading my "Piece of a shit story"?

Thirdly, your level of hostility over a flipping FANFICTION STORY was totally uncalled for.

Also, Did you miss the part where Chloe and Tom actually DIDN'T sleep together on their date. He fed off of Beca's insecurity because he knew he couldn't have Chloe the way he wanted her. Making Beca believe that he could was the next best thing. Everyone else that read the story seemed to catch that.

Lastly, I find irony in the fact that you are calling me a horrible writer when you have words misspelled all over your review. (By the way this, is how you spell "their" when referring to people and not a place, and this is how you spell "with"...always.) I would be a dick and revise your whole review so it would make more sense, but that would take all day and I have other things to do, like live.

Thanks for reading and reviewing though!