Again, I'm still Yasmine155. Okay, now here's the rewritten version like I promised, although some things may be different.
The Legend of the Blue Blur
Chapter 1: Enter the Sonic gang
Ages:
Sonic: 15
Manic: 15
Sonia: 15
Aleena:40
Tails: 13
Knuckles: 16
Amy: 14
Cream:13
Tikal: 14
Shadow: 15
Rouge: 17
Espio: 16
Charmy: 13
Vector: 18
Silver: 15
Blaze: 15
Marine: 13
Nicole: 15
Saffron: 13
Jet: 15
Wave: 16
Storm:18
There was a blue haired boy who looked around the age of 15, snoring lightly in his sleep. He was sleeping peacefully in his room. His room had sapphire blue walls and a sky blue carpet. On his walls were posters of blue mustangs, and in one of the corners of his rooms was an electric blue guitar. All seemed quiet and peaceful, that is until his door flew open. In came the room was a girl and a boy. The girl had orchid colored hair and pink eyes while the boy had green hair and sky blue eyes, they both looked around the same age as the blue haired boy.
"Sonic," the girl started, "mom sent us up here to get you up, so wake up! You're the last one who needs to get dressed, Manic and I are already dressed. But I do need to fix my hair and I can't do that unless you hurry up and get in the shower, so get up now!"
The blue haired boy, apparently known as 'Sonic', only groaned and shifted in his bed. "Five...more...minutes."
The girl sighed and turned to the green haired boy, but then she suddenly smiled. "Care to do the honors, Manic?"
The green haired boy who was now known as 'Manic', smiled a devious smile. "It would be my pleasure, sis." as he scanned Sonic's room and spotted a glass cup filled with water on Sonic's navy blue dresser. Walking over, he snatched the glass and silently edged over to Sonic's bed. Tilting the glass over Sonic's head, Manic looked back at the girl, waiting for her reaction. The girl tried to stuff a chuckle that may have came any second now and she gave a thumbs up, indicating she was ready for the act to begin. Manic nodded and continued tilting the glass. The water continued sliding down the glass until...
SPLASH!
Sonic immediately snapped his emerald green eyes clean open and he shrieked so loud, it could've woken up China. He heard low snickering until it quickly turned into fits of laughter, looking down he saw Manic and the girl laughing hard on the ground. He felt soaked and noticed Manic holding a glass. After finally realizing what happened, Sonic blushed a deep scarlet red.
"M-Manic! S-Sonia! So not cool!" he shouted. After a few more minutes of laughing, Manic and the girl now known as 'Sonia', finally calmed down and faced their flushed brother.
"Hey, what can I say? We tried getting you up, but when you wouldn't listen, we thought you could learned the hard way." Sonia said.
"Yeah, and you should've seen your face! It was priceless, man I wished I had a camera on me right now!" Manic said, wiping a tear out of his eye.
"Okay, okay, I'm up. Can you guys leave now?" Sonic groaned.
"Okay, we'll leave you be, just get in the shower already. I need to finish my hair." Sonia said as she and Manic walked out the room. Sonic sighed.
"Well, might as well get ready for school." he said as he began getting his things ready.
"Sonic, how many times do I have to ask you NOT to run in the house?" asked a woman who looked around her early 40's. She had dark violet hair, emerald green eyes, and was wearing a white robe and gown.
"Sorry mom, but I need to get going or I'm gonna miss the bus!" Sonic cried, now wearing a white T-shirt, a blue jacket, blue jeans shorts, and his favorite red sneakers.
"Oh alright, but at least take something for you to snack on so you don't starve." his mom said.
"Okay, I'll take an apple!" Sonic said, running up to the refrigerator and opening it. He snatched a green apple and slammed the door to the refrigerator shut. Afterwards he made his way towards the front door. "Bye mom, seeya after school!" as he dashed out the door.
Sonic's mom, whose name was actually Aleena, sighed. "Kids, what are you going to do with them nowadays?"
"Hey Sonic, what took you so long?" asked Miles Prower, Sonic's best friend. He had blonde hair, sky blue eyes, and wore a yellow shirt, a pair of khaki shorts, and his favorite red and white sneakers. He's 13 years old and everyone called this young boy by his nickname, Tails, because he always wore a yellow jacket around his waist causing two long sleeves to stick out and look like as if they were tails.
"Oh, you know, the usual, oversleeping, getting woken up by my sibs(he shot a glare at his siblings, who chuckled)and rushing out the house." Sonic said.
"Heh, what trick did they use on you this time?" smirked Knuckles, Sonic's friendly rival. He was 16 years old, had red colored hair, violet eyes, and wore a red T-shirt, a pair of khaki pants, and his favorite red and yellow Lego shoes. Sonic blushed a little remembering what previously happened this morning.
"Well...I...uh..." he choked.
"I totally soaked him and he screamed like a girl!" Manic exclaimed, now wearing a green T-shirt, blue ripped jeans, and his favorite red and white shoe-laced shoes. After hearing this, everyone of Sonic's friends burst out laughing.
"Wait, that was you who screamed?" asked Jet, Sonic's second racing rival. He was 15 years old, had dark green hair, ocean blue eyes, and wore a dark green jacket, a white T-shirt, a pair of blue jeans, and his favorite pair of red boots with black arrows down the middle. "I thought that was Mr. Baker shouting at Mrs. Blike's cat again!"
Sonic looked at his feet and shoved his hands in his pockets, unable to say a word.
"Stop it, you guys! I'm sure he wasn't expecting to get wet, so that's why he screamed!" defended Amy Rose, a girl whose 14 years old, and is obsessed with Sonic, and his school fan girl. She had pink hair, jade green eyes, wore a red hairband, and wore a her favorite red sleeveless dress, golden bracelets, and red boots.
"Amy's right, please stop laughing everyone." pleaded Cream, Amy's best friend. She was 13 years old, had creamed colored hair with orange highlights, caramel brown eyes, and wore her favorite white collared orange dress with her blue neck tie, and orange and yellow shoes. Being so cute and adorable for a 13 year old, she managed to get everyone to settle down.
"Alright, we're done, we're done." said Silver, a boy whose 15 years old and physic. He had silvery white hair, golden yellow eyes, and wore a silvery white jacket, a whit T-shirt, white jeans, and his favorite white, navy, and aqua boots which had a ruby on each boot.
"Thank god." Sonic sighed. He then scanned the rest of the group to make sure everyone were there. His siblings, Tails, Knuckles, Amy, Cream, Tikal, Shadow, Rouge, Espio, Vector, Charmy, Saffron, Nicole, Silver, Blaze, Marine, Jet, Wave, and Storm were all here. But there were a few people missing.(If you don't want a description for each character, then skip down to the 13th paragraph.)
Tikal was Knuckles' best friend and she loved nothing but peace. She was 14 years old, had orange hair, sapphire blue eyes, and wore a white tank top, a green skirt with a peach and pink pattern, and a pair of white sandals.
Shadow was Sonic's first and main racing rival. He was 15 years old, had black hair with crimson red highlights, crimson red eyes, and wore a white T-shirt, a black jacket with a little bit of red stripes, a pair of black jeans, and his favorite black, red, and white skate like shoes.
Rouge was the sneakiest girl in the group and possibly the whole school, she loved nothing more than jewels. She was 17 years old, had snow white hair, aqua colored eyes, and wore a black tank top with a pink heart in the middle, a pair of black sweat pants, and her favorite white high heeled pink heart toed shoes.
Espio was perhaps the most stealthiest kid in the group and possibly the whole school. He was 16 years old, had orchid colored hair, golden yellow eyes, and wore a orchid colored sleeveless jacket, orchid colored jeans, and his favorite violet colored shoes with black straps.
Vector was the music lover, and perhaps money lover of the group. He was 18 years old, had green hair, orange eyes, and wore a lime green jacket, green vest, blue jeans, and a his favorite black boots with a silver and orange lining.
Charmy was the scatter brain of the group. He was 13 years old, had brown hair, wears his favorite black helmet(regardless the school rules), bright orange eyes, and wore an orange vest with a white V-collar, a pair of black shorts, and his favorite orange sneakers.
Saffron was Charmy's best friend. She was 13 years old, had yellow hair, sapphire blue eyes, and wore her favorite pink dress, bomber jacket, and pair of pink shoes.
Nicole was Saffron's best friend and mainly spent her time with computers. She was 15 years old, had black hair, aqua colored eyes, and wore her favorite lavender colored dress, bracelets, and black low flats.
Blaze was Silver's best friend and love interest. She was 15 years old, had lavender hair with purple highlights and a red hair tie, deep yellow eyes, and wore her favorite violet coat, white tights, and dark pink high heeled shoes.
Marine was one of Blaze's closest friends and one of a kind. She was 13 years old, had orange hair with two yellow scrunchies, ocean blue eyes, and wore a lime green strapless tube top with a little white trim, a pair of black shorts, and her favorite pair of lime green and orange sneakers.
Wave was the second most smartest person in the group, she was a technician. She was 17 years old, had violet hair with a white bandanna and sunglasses, sky blue eyes, and wore a white tube top along with a necklace, a pair of white trousers with purple flames on them, and her favorite red boots.
Last but not least was Storm, the second most toughest one in the group. He was 18 years old, had grey hair, baby blue eyes, and wore a white T-shirt, an orange vest, a pair of grey trousers, and his favorite black sneakers.
Once he finished doing a head count, he scratched one of his ears. "So," he started, "where's Mighty and the others?"
"Oi, the blokes decided to walk to school instead of ridin' the bus, mate." Marine said. Nicole then decided to change the topic.
"By any chance, have any of you heard of the special guest we're meant to be having in science class today?" she asked. Everyone thought for a moment, trying to recall of this special guest. Tails then snapped his fingers in realization.
"Oh, yeah, I remember now. Isn't he a world wide scientist who goes by the name of Dr. Robotnik?" he asked. Nicole nodded in response. Some of the boys snickered at the name.
"Heh Robotnik? What parent in their right mind would name their child that?" Jet snickered.
"Maybe someone who's been watching too many cartoons? The name isn't even creative." smirked Shadow. Tikal clasped her hands together.
"Please everyone, it isn't the right thing to do if you make fun of someone's name. It's just mean and cruel, so please stop it!" she pleaded. Everyone stopped laughing a few minutes later, for no one couldn't resist Tikal's calm nature.
"Alright, we're finished." Knuckles said, still a bit shaky.
"But still, I wonder what this so called 'doctor' will have in store for us?" Rouge said with her smooth seductive tone voice. "Maybe he might be able to make Knuckie a little less gullible." as she gave a quick wink to the red haired boy. Knuckles took offence of that and glared at her.
"Hey, I'm not gullible! I happen to be very smart, thank you!" he huffed.
"Yeah, maybe in the ice age." Sonic muttered. Knuckles shot the blue haired jokester a death glare as everyone laughed. Soon enough the bus came and stopped, waiting for the kids to get on. Everyone followed the lead and got on the bus, although, Sonic was the last one to get on. But, before he got on, he turned to the crystal blue sky.
"For just once in my life, please let something interesting happen." he muttered, and then hopped on the bus as it drove off. But Sonic would get something far more than interesting today, he'd get the ride of his life and start off his legend...as a hero.
And there's goes the rewrite of the first chapter of The Legend of the Blue Blur. I hope it you liked it, the second chapter will be coming soon, until then please read and review!