OK first order of business, I can think of a good plot but my spell and grammar is off . Now I now have a friend that has nothing better to do than help me so ya that's good news. Bad news I'm killing this story and having v2 or version 2 the plot will be different and more clear. I thank all that did enjoy this. As some know there was one other writer but he does not have the time to write so the plot is all mine. So that's good but I will take ideas from yall. Thank you for the time the new story will be "The Orion Effect v2 " it should be up tonight. thanks!