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Mosstail of ThunderClan: He lived in the cave beside StarClan… so he occasionally goes out to visit his mate, Hollyleaf. Aww, how cute? Thanks for the comment! I'll update sooner, at least try to!
Guest: Anything for loyal reviewers xD
Guest: Okay! :D
Ventus-X-Me: Here it issssss SQUEEEE! Have no idea what that means… :/
Puppytime: I love Half x Jay… I'll let them visit each other in dreams…? I don't want to do anything too unrealistic. But I hate it when Jayfeather is sad… it makes me feel sad. I love Jayfeather, though he is hard to write about xD.
Rainclaw99: Good, I usually don't do heaps long timeskips like that, but then again like you said… I'm the author ;). Thank you :D
Runningfur: Ivypool was left out, she may not be a huge member in this prophecy, but she takes part in it, and helps those who aren't sure. I'm sure it'll be an outstanding story lol. It's fine, I love rambling on reviews! Here's the update
Rainstripe300: Molewhisker and Cherryheart got voted on the poll… I came up with Honeykit, for Honeyfern, and Hollykit, for Hollyleaf (Honeyfern is Cinderheart's sister so yeah, and Cinderheart's BFF was Hollyleaf, and she was the sister of Lionblaze, so I really can't imagine them not calling their daughter that) and Brownkit, I figured that would work. Tigerkit for Tigerheart, with Dovewing. Will he suffer for his name? Anyway, I'm rambling on like Runningfur lol.
TinaFrostDahMuffinburger: YEAH IVYPOOL! :D Yeah I have a pretty good feeling they are, they captured Daisy as it said in the Updates for ThunderClan. Breezepelt will probably do some nasty stuff in this book. I'm just guessing myself since I have no idea what to write lol.
Bramblewhisker88: I might use that name! But unfortunately, not for Ivypool's kit(s) since I have that all planned out, I have a note on my Ipod and I've worked out plenty of pairings and kits xD Thanks!
(Ivypool's POV)
Ivypool had received a dream from Hollyleaf. I am the guider of the three, but who are they? She was in the nursery, expecting Toadstep's kits. I guess his wish came true after all she smirked.
She saw Hollykit and Honeykit bouncing around outside, and Ivypool watched Brownkit sit in the corner, his amber eyes narrowed. Brownkit was born really small and Jayfeather was sure the little tom wouldn't make it through the night, but he had pulled through.
I hope Bramblestar makes him an apprentice… Honeykit and Hollykit are three-and-a-half moons old, and they are huge compared to Brownkit.
She slowly got to her paws, wondering if she could sneak to the freshkill pile. One movement from her and Toadstep would scold and lecture her about the damage she could do to her kits. Oh no Ivypool, the kits could come too early if you keep bouncing around! Jayfeather, Ivypool is moving too much, what if the kits come late?
It's like he intended for her to be stuck in here, trapped like a mouse. "I'm going, and he can't stop me," she murmured, she carefully stepped past Dovewing, who was sleeping with her kits beside her. They were two moons old, along with Squirrelflight's kits.
The nursery was packed. ThunderClan was thriving!
She was halfway to the freshkill pile. "Ivypool!" her hope shattered. "What are you doing, if you were hungry, I could've gotten you something!" it was Toadstep. "I'm going a bit stir crazy, maybe a small walk would help," hope shone in her dark blue eyes.
"No, don't try to sweet talk me," Toadstep growled. "I want what's best for our kits, and this is not doing it!" Ivypool argued back. "Is keeping their mother trapped in the nursery any better?" Toadstep hissed. "Stop thinking of yourself! Think of your kits!" Toadstep spat.
"Oh StarClan, the kits, the kits! It seems the only reason you took me as a mate was to ditch me in the nursery with kits, if you were me, you'd understand!"
Toadstep flattened his ears. "I'm only thinking of the kits…" he murmured quietly, glaring at her with such, unfamiliar, cold, green eyes. "I'm going for a walk, and I'll make sure you don't leave camp, I have friends," he reminded her and he stormed off, lashing his long tail.
Ivypool felt a tear slide down her muzzle. This is too hard, I wish I was a warrior she felt her stomach rumble and not out of hunger. Hush, hush kits…
"I'm going to the lake," she decided aloud and as she started her way to the entrance, Foxleap got in front of her. "Where are you going, I thought Toadstep told you stay put…"
"Who died and made him leader?" she snapped, barging past the glossy-furred tom. He hissed and called an alert. Wow, who knew so much fuss could be caused just for an innocent queen wanting a walk?
(Brownkit's POV)
Brownkit huddled in the nursery… I want to play he thought, feeling annoyed since Ivypool wasn't here. She'd become like a second mum to Brownkit, and he hung out with her when he was confined to the nursery.
"I hate being small!" he wasn't allowed to play outside with his littermates. Hawkkit and Robinkit were batting a moss ball around and Featherkit and Tigerkit were trying to sneak over without waking their mother.
"Brownkit, wanna play?" Robinkit squeaked. "Sure," he murmured unconvincingly. "Cheer up mousebrain!" Hawkkit snorted.
"Shut-up! You'd be like me if you were confined to the nursery while your littermates played outside!" Brownkit retorted. Hawkkit looked at his paws and Brownkit knew he had won the argument.
Featherkit and Tigerkit joined the brawl and the moss ball went flying over Brownkit's head. He chased it, but his small paws didn't get him very far before Hawkkit and Robinkit literally ran him over.
They were younger than him for StarClan's sake, and they still flattened him like a mouse. Brownkit felt no use in this clan. I'll probably have to become a stinking medicine cat not that he didn't like Jayfeather, or Briarlight, or Leafpool… or even Brightheart. He just wanted to be a warrior, and grow strong like his father, Lionblaze.
Warriors (c) Erin Hunter
Brownkit, Honeykit, Hollykit, Featherkit, Graykit, Tigerkit, Hawkkit, Robinkit (c) Blossomstripe
Okay, now we all know how Brownkit feels… pretty depressing life, I feel horrible for him! His personality is depressed I'm guessing. Robinkit is cheerful, and is never down, and Hawkkit likes to argue I guess. I know you want to review…