Chapter 1: The Overrated beginning at the Moby Dick
Disclaimer: I DON'T OWN ONE PIECE IN THIS WORLD. BUT IN ANOTHER UNIVERSE I'M THE PIRATE KING(QUEEN) MWAHAHAHA!
Warnings: There shall be Sailor-mouthing O_o and I may call Whitebeard 'Oyaji' which is in Japanese and since some people don't like it when there are two languages I try to use English instead of the common Japanese words.
"Oi oi, it seems that you mistook Me." a black-haired man in his early 20's said as he stood up from his seat. A blue-haired man with a large scar on his left arm and an eye patch on his right eye and his friends were picking on him.
'"Oh, really? I think what I said was correct." the man casually replied with a grin.
The black-haired kid was unlucky, truly unlucky to get picked on by the 104,000,000 beri pirate rookie. He pulled out a gun and pointed it at the man. The blue haired man burst into laughter.
"You think you could kill me? Gahahahahaha, classic!"
A tick mark appeared on the black-haired kid's forehead. He pulled the trigger without any hesitation. Then the blue haired man pulled out his hand into a 'stop' sign; then, the bullets exploded before they could even reach him.
"As I said, you won't last a week here." The blue haired man said, pulling out his pistol and pointed it to the now frightened boy.
Then suddenly, the doors crashed open.
"Marny~ get me pizza!" a girl was average in height with jet black hair and dark violet eyes; she was faintly tanned and had her hair in a pony tail.
"What is up with you people? What are you gawking at?!" She yelled to the people at the stomped to the counter ignoring the two men. "Marny! Hurry up!" She yelled.
The blue haired man laughed then shot the black-haired man. But the girl acted as if she didn't hear anything and continued to slam on the counter. The woman on the counter finally gave her pizza which had shut her up. The blue haired man sat next to her.
"Hey, little lady." He greeted.
The girl looked at him. "Hi." she said then went back to eating.
"What's someone like you doing in a dangerous place like this?" He chuckled. "This IS the New World."
She didn't even bother looking at him. "Bounty Hunting." She replied while reaching for her wallet.
"You? Bounting Hunty?"
"Bounty Hunting." She corrected.
"How could a little girl like you–"he was cut off by the girl thrusting a sword through his chest. She pulled it back then unsheathed it.
"Do NOT call me a girl." She said with venom dripping from every word.
Then the girl glared at the cold body lying beneath the pool of blood.
"Shiro, you can't just go around killing my customers!" Marny the bar owner said while glaring at Shiro with her hands on her hips.
Shiro looked at the woman; she was her close friend's friend so that's the reason she stayed here with her until her log pose pouted then pointed at the man. "He pissed me off." She reasoned.
Marny sighed. "You're lucky he has a bounty or I would've given you to the Marines by now." She said while shaking her head.
"Then I would've killed all of them." Shiro said and smile widely.
"She's Shiro Miyuki r-right? The West blue native criminal wanted for 95,000,000 beri."
"Isn't she the one sent to Impel Down at the age of seven? Just last week, I read at the newspaper that she escaped."
"That was a year ago you baka! She escaped a year ago."
"Oh."
"I heard she's being chased by the World Government."
"She killed 'Fire Pistol' Rick! He has a bigger bounty than her!"
"Oi, I'm over here." Shiro pointed out to the group of men whispering at the corner of the bar.
They all turned around to look at her, but then ran away scared. Shiro frowned. They're always like that she thought. "I'm leaving." Shiro said to Marny and threw a small bag of gold to her. She walked to the exit, and then waved off.
"Keep the change."
Shiro was walking down the busy streets of Toriko–the current island where she is.
"Let's see, I got almost everything I need…all I need now is…" She trailed off. "A new pair of shoes." Shiro added after seeing a shoe store.
She entered.
"Good Afternoon miss and welcome to Patty's Laces the finest sellers of shoes in the entire Grand Line." The clerk greeted.
She looked around to find some sturdy fire-proof shoes. She had to make sure to get almost anything fire-proof, better be safe than running around naked. There were tons of shoes in the place from sandals to boots. She kept on looking 'til she saw a pair of crème and brown colored boots reaching under her knees.
"Perfect!" She said and grinned.
She went to the counter to pay for it then she noticed a family of nobles.
"It's your great grandmother's diamond necklace which had been passed in our family from generations." The dad said to his daughter, holding a box with a diamond necklace inside. The daughter was a petite white-haired girl with deep blue eyes; and she was wearing a pretty blue 'noble-like' girly dress.
"So that means it used? That's gross, so no thanks." She said and looked at her parents.
"I'm a noble; I deserve new expensive jewelry not old used ones." She added.
Shiro glared at the girl. She hated people who think they're better than everyone else just because of their status; they're too arrogant and selfish. Then the girl noticed Shiro glaring at her.
"What are you low-life looking at?" She coldly while glaring back.
"I don't know, a cruel selfish arrogant bitch." Shiro replied with a smirk.
The noble girl gasped.
"How dare you speak to me–a noble like that? My father is a powerful man."She said. "Tell her, daddy."
"Miss, a lady shouldn't speak foul words like that. Please just leave us alone."
Shiro just smiled and shrugged. "Whatever you say..." She said and went ahead of them then paid for the shoes.
"You can't just let her leave like that! She was rude to me. She thinks a low-life like her could speak to me like that." The girl said as she stomped her foot.
"Sorry Princess Spoiled bitch, but you should really look at a mirror. Your face is slowly imitating your ugly personality; well, I hope we see each other again. Bye Mr. and Mrs. Ass fuck, I'm very sorry for you to have such a spoiled whore as a daughter. Cheerio!" Shiro said before she left, leaving an angry family behind.
She grinned. It was in her nature to be rude; she didn't care what people she was being rude at thought. She was a natural sailor-mouth after all.
Shiro immediately left for the port after buying her shoes.
I can't stay here for too long, sooner or later the Marines will find out I'm here or worse –the World Government. She shuddered at the thought. When she finally found the port she looked for her ship – the Silver Horseman. She placed the crates of food onboard and set sail. "Just another day that's gone to waste." She whispered.
I came here to find a purpose, a purpose to live. My life doesn't have any meaning anymore, so I'm here to find a new dream, a new life, and new…friends.
"Friends" She repeated.
How long has it been? Since I had friends? Two years perhaps, I really don't know. I don't want to remember everything again. It hurts to just try to remember it.
She shook her head. "I gotta stop thinking about these kinds of things." Shiro said to herself.
Then her thoughts drifted to what happened in the bar earlier.
I can't believe the guy actually thought I was a bounty hunter. The Marines'll probably arrest me first if that happens!
Shiro leaned at the main mast and gave a small yawn. Then she closed her eyes then went to sleep.
"One sheep, two sheep, four sheep, five sheep, six sheep, seven sheep, 998, 936, 634, 23, 5,4,3,2,5, Baa baa black shit…have you any wool?" Shiro sang as she was lying down at the deck of her ship.
Her stomach growled—all of her food supply was gone. It had been only two days after she had set sail from the island 'Toriko'.She got up then dusted her self.
Then a large sea-king rose from the sea.
Shiro's eyes gleamed of hunger. "Perfect timing! I haven't eaten all day!" She said while unsheathing her katana.
The sea-king, realizing that he's gonna be the young girl's lunch slowly backed away.
"No you don't!" She said then jumped off the railing. While she was on the air she sliced the sea-king, and then the sea-king meat landed on the deck. She landed on the railing.
"Now how am I gonna cook all this?" She asked herself tapping her index finger on her chin. She hasn't eaten since yesterday and it was really bad for her. "Crap, the flame thrower's out of juice." She mumbled.
Then her head started to hurt really badly. Shiro couldn't take it anymore; the pain of hunger was overwhelming. She was in the middle of the ocean, with nothing to eat, nothing to cook with, and the effect of hunger is starting to kick vision started to blur, her head began to throb, her body's getting frail, and her stomach hurts. She fell on her knees, clutching her stomach.
"I'm gonna die." Shiro whispered before she fainted.
Marco was feeling pretty good that particular day, everything was going smoothly. Everyone was doing all their jobs, the weather was nice, the nurses said that Oyaji's health is starting to get better, and there were no troubles at their islands. As he was about to go to his room to sleep, he remembered something no, someone.
"Ace." He mumbled then frowned.
So he went up to the crow's nest only to see the second division commander sleeping on duty. He scowled.
"Stop sleeping on duty, yoi!" Marco said as he hit Ace in the head.
"Huh? What?" Ace asked, still feeling sleepy.
"You're supposed to look for any signs of islands or ships not sleep on duty, you idiot!"
"Why do I have to do it?" Ace whined.
"It's your punishment after starting a food fight at the dining hall yesterday."
Ace's frown turned into a small grin. "Ah, that was awesome."
"No it wasn't! You got almost everybody in trouble. Now, any signs of ships?"
"Well…there's one over there." Ace pointed out.
Marco turned to look at the direction where Ace pointed to. It was a galleon with its sails having no Jolly Roger or sea-gull whatsoever
"Well, it's not a pirate ship…then what is it?" Ace asked.
"We better investigate." Marco said.
Ace yawned then nodded.
"Oh look a dead sea-king." Ace pointed out.
"He noticed the sea-king but not the unconscious girl…stupid." Marco mumbled then shook his head at his comrade's stupidity.
"What's this ship anyway? No Jolly Roger or even a seagull, no crew, no food, no sake, just an unconscious girl and her stuff." Ace commented.
"We better take her to the ship, yoi"
"Yeah it'd be best if we do, she doesn't seem injured so we don't have to take her to the infirmary."
"We'll just ask her who she is when she wakes up."
Ace nodded.
"Do you think she's a pirate?"
"Nah, she's too skinny and she looks fragile and weak"
"Oi, she's waking up."
Shiro could hear voices around her, waking her up.
She stirred a bit and opened her eyes.
Everything was a bit blurry at first then it became clearer.
Then she saw two pairs of eyes staring at her.
One had black hair, an orange hat, freckles and appeared to be shirtless, the other one looks like a blonde pineapple minus the spikes, with a purple jacket and a tattoo she can't get a good look at. They were staring at her as if waiting for her to say something.
Well this awkward, I'm really not used with meeting new people she thought.
She sat up from the bed she was in, and crossed her arms. "Who the hell are you?"It was her usual response to meeting strangers.
"She seems to be a rude one, yoi." The blond said and smiled.
Before Shiro could reply her stomach growled. She held her stomach in pain. This was one of the reasons she needed a lot of food on board her ship.
"Here, eat it." The man with the orange hat said and handed over a tray of food.
She blinked a few times, and then scarfed it all down. Her stomach still growled.
"Uh, thank you for the food but…do you happen to have…more?" She asked shyly.
The Blond man smiled. "You can come with us to the dining hall, it is lunchtime anyways."
She smiled a bit. "Thank you."
He motioned for her to come. While she was following them, she noticed the man-with-the-orange-cowboy-hat's tattoo on his back. She would've known that sign anywhere.
"Whitebeard pirates." She whispered to herself.
If freckles has that tattoo that means he's a member, which goes for pineapple-chan too! she thought. She swallowed in fear. What kind of mess had she gotten herself into she thought.
Shiro tried to pinch herself again to check if she was dreaming.
"Welcome to the dining hall." 'Freckles' said as he opened the door revealing the huge room.
There were men eating, drinking, and some were even dancing, fighting, and singing on the tables. And on one wall was a huge Whitebeard pirate's flag.
"So do you know who we are now?" 'Pineapple' asked while they were walking along the huge place.
She simply nodded. He and freckles smiled. Then finally they led her to a table on the corner of the room.
"Sit here." Freckles motioned for the chair and she complied.
"Here, you could get anything you like." Pineapple said while handing her a plate and gesturing to all the food.
She smiled and nodded.
She tried her best to eat and act like a lady, if you just ignore the piles of dishes she had finished. The freckle-faced man was at her left and the blond man was at her right.
"He has narcolepsy, yoi." The blond whispered as he pointed to the freckle-faced cowboy.
She just nodded.
"Hey Marco, why'd you bring a girl on the ship?" a man with a mustache asked.
"Oi, oi. You don't suppose we'd let a passed out woman on the sea to starve, yeah? Even pirates have hearts." Marco, which Shiro thinks is the blond pineapple's name said. "Besides it was Ace's idea, and mines."
"So what's your name?" Freckles asked, finally awake from his nap.
"Shiro, Miyuki Shiro." She said.
"Well Shiro, I'm Marco." Marco said with a lazy smile.
"I'm Ace, Portgas D. Ace, at your service." Freckle-man said lazily.
Marco pointed to the "Fat Spanish Man" ( which Shiro thinks is the proper name for the idiot who called her a girl).
Okay, maybe he's not really fat but he called me a girl- yeah? NOBODY calls me a girl and lives...THIS is an exception because they're Whitebeard's crew and they'll probably be extremely strong and scary.
"He's Vista."
"That's Jozu." Ace said while pointing to a scary man.
"And there's Blamenco, Rakuyo, Namur's the Shark man, Blenheim, Curiel, Kingdew, Haruta – yes, she's a girl, Atmos, Jiru, Fossa, and Izo." Marco said while pointing to each one when his/her name's mentioned.
Too many names, I think I'm having a headache
Shiro nodded.
"Did you tell Pops about this?" Izo asked.
Is he a girl or a man? I'm confused. Maybe I should ask him…maybe not.
"We're gonna bring her to the old man later." Marco said.
Hmm…are pirates supposed to be THIS nice? I mean, aren't they supposed to feed me to sharks or something?
"I wonder is she's gonna be thrown off-board or he'll let me burn her alive." Ace said smiling.
Oh, they're real. Well, fuck me. Bye world! Bye Sea! Bye moon! Bye sun! I'll always remember you my friends.
Shiro forced herself to look nonchalant. They frowned at her reaction.
"Aren't you scared?" Ace asked.
"No, it's about time I die."Shiro said and smiled.
She tried to swallow to keep my self from laughing. They were still gaping at her, except Ace who fell asleep. A man appeared and snapped everyone out of their thoughts.
"Commander Marco, I found her." He said handing Marco a folder.
"Quite a small bounty…95,000,000 beri." Marco said reading something inside the folder.
Wow! They raised it? Pfft, they could've least made it to a hundred million, cheapskates.
"How'd you get a bounty?" Haruta asked.
Shiro shrugged.
Maybe that Saint Arseloch finally woke up from his comma…oooh-la-la this is deep fudge. What if a marine admiral goes after me? *gulp* Uh-oh
"Hmmm a newspaper clipping about you." Marco said pulling out a newspaper article.
Everyone in the table motioned for him to read it.
"Seven year old girl in West Blue murders 37 innocent civilians and has left one severely injured."
He read aloud. Shiro narrowed her eyes.
I could've sworn there are only 37 of them.
Some other crew members gathered around Marco even if they don't know why he's reading it for.
"A seven-year old killing 37 men? Is this even real?" a man from the other tables asked."What kind of monster is she?"
Shiro rolled her eyes at his comment. Marco continued.
"The survivor, who pleads his name to not be mentioned, has told us what had happened on that night."
She scooted closer to Marco, peering over the newspaper clipping.
"And I quote: It was a normal summer night; we were having fun and drinking at my friend's place. Then a little girl came inside. I asked her what she was doing there and to go home because it's already late. But she threw a dagger at me! Hitting me in the stomach! Then she got a sword and started beheading my friends and slicing and killing them. There was so much blood! It was truly scary, horrifying, I couldn't even stand up because I was so scared! She was really scary! She's a heartless and cruel monster! I pretended to be dead to get justice! All my friends died, one after another!"
"The girl really is a witch!" a man said.
Shiro clenched her fists. As much she wanted to murder them, she remembered what her old friend used to say:
"Whitebeard always avenges his nakama so ya better not mess with 'em! 'specially Whitebeard himself." The drunkard once said.
Shiro sighed.
"The girl –Shiro Miyuki was soon found out to be the daughter of the late "Enchantress" Ann Maru who had committed unforgivable crimes such as murder, piracy, theft, kidnapping, and many others."
"Hey, Anne Maru? You mean that pirate who kills civilians, pirates and Marines and takes their hearts and feeds it to animals? I heard she places her victim's heads in stakes surrounding her ship. Truly sadistic she is, it's a good thing she's dead." Another person said. "Hey isn't she the woman who you guys were talking about the other day?"
ARGH! Just thinking about the hag makes me sick to me stomach. But he's right. It's a good thing she's dead
Shiro glared at the fork she was holding.
They don't understand—nobody really does.
Ace looked at Shiro who was glaring at a fork.
Hmm, maybe the bastards overdid it
So he snatched the paper from Marco's hand and burned it along with the folder.
"Ooops." He said sarcastically.
Marco gave him a 'what-the-hell' look. Ace nodded to Shiro's direction and wiggled his eyebrows. Marco also noticed Shiro's behavior. He looked back at him and nodded.
"Alright, enough of this! Get back to work you lazy asses!"
They scurried off the hall.
"Sorry." Marco said putting his hands on his pockets."It's my fault."
Ace nodded.
"He's right. It's his entire fault. He has a brain the size of a raisin. Such a bird brain he is." Ace commented making Marco hit him in the head.
She stood up from her chair.
"Its okay, trust me, I'm used to this kind of treatment." She smiled reassuringly.
Ace smiled back.
"Well, I guess it's time for you to meet Pops."
Shiro was nervous. Her hands were shaky and she was feeling uncomfortable.
"Whitebeard has conqueror's haki, ya know that righ'? I told ya 'bout it a buncha times. You have ter have a strong will ta not faint when ya meet him." I remember my friend used to say.
She sighed as Marco and Ace escorted her to the deck.
"Ace, Marco, Izo said you wanted to tell me something." A large scary voice said.
I'm gonna die!
"Oyaji, meet Shiro." Ace said then patted her on the back, and pushed her forward to a huge man with his signature white—moon like mustache.
"Shiro, huh?" He said and looked at the girl.
She forced herself to look as calm as possible.
Well on the inside however, she was constantly banging her head on the floor running and screaming:"BLOODY HELL, I WANT TO LIVE! I DON'T WANNA DIE!"
"We found Shiro on her ship passed out due to hunger." Marco explained.
Ace nudged her to speak but she ignored him. One wrong word and I'm dead. DEAD!
"What was your whole name again?" Marco asked, scratching his head.
"Shiro Miyuki." She replied coolly.
"Hmm…you remind me of an old friend." Whitebeard said, examining her.
"And who is that s-sir?" she asked, stuttering on the last word.
"Aye, exactly like her. Every single detail too. But your ears…." He trailed off. She touched her ears.
"They're nothing like hers. Gurararara I haven't seen that brat for a long time." He continued.
"Pardon?"
"Who are your parents?" He asked, changing the subject.
Shiro felt herself tense up immediately.
Should I tell him? They're dead anyways.
"Well?"
"I don't know my biological father but I've been informed long ago that my mother is Ann Maru." She said.
Gosh I'm so formal. Mwahahahaha
"Gurararara I was right, you are the daughter of that hyperactive brat." He said.
Hyper active brat? He knew her?
"You know HER?" She asked, bewildered.
"Yes, we were good friends me and that squirt. You remind me a lot of her, are you a pirate as well?" he asked.
She shook her head.
"Well then, the ocean is vast, and everyone has freedom over it, no one has a single right to hold down man who wants to sail…"
What the hell is this old geezer talking about? You can't go from "Hi, I know your mom" to deep senseless shit about sailing. Was he dropped at birth, or something?!
Oops, manners! Good thing he can't read my thoughts. Or can he?
"Would you like want to roam the see using my name and become my daughter?"
Wait...WHAT?
She stood there gaping at him, her jaw dropping to the floor.
I know that "Oyaji" calls his crew mates his children and I think it's sweet but that doesn't matter, what matters is: DID HE REALLY JUST ASK ME TO JOIN HIS CREW?!
"B-but Oyaji, we just met her! We don't know if we could trust her yet!" Vista said.
She looked around; all the crew members were surrounding them now.
"What if she was from the World Government?" Another shouted.
"Any other objections?" The old man said in angry tone making everyone fall silent.
"Now, what do you say Shiro?" he asked.
Wow. This is all so sudden. And I even dissed him in my mind! What should I say? Should I say yes? I mean…I'll get them into trouble and it seems like everyone doesn't want me here. But…I've always wanted to join a pirate crew again...where I'm not kidnapped and held against my will. It feels good to be wanted. Maybe…just maybe I should say…yes? He's an amazing pirate some people say…the others are those who don't know him. The strongest man in the world huh? Then me? As his nakama? Wow…
She tried to open her mouth but words don't come out. They're stuck, she's she just nodded slowly.
"Gurararara…very well then." He said. "Ace!"
"Yes, Oyaji?"
"I'm putting her under your division. Get her a room to stay in and make sure you train her well starting today." He shifted his gaze to hers.
"I'm expecting a lot from you, Shiro."
Shiro swallowed an imaginary lump in her throat.
Expect? Me? And what's more important: Training?! I have to train—again?
Well, I am getting pretty weak I guess some training will do me good. I have to train my armament haki too; I've training my haki for more than 7 years now.
My observation haki is above average but my armament haki…well…erm…it sucks. Okay it's pretty good but I could only deflect bullets and that only. But even if I deflect it, it still hurts as if it hit me. So the good thing is I don't have to remove a bullet from my skin or organs. But the pain prevents me from moving cause of the pain. So in total the armament haki is absolutely useless with guns—the only thing it can deflect.
I don't have conqueror's haki though, because if I did I'd be panicking about how many things I need to train. And then there's my extremely shitty devil fruit ability. For goodness sake it's been 14 years now and I can't even control it properly yet! Using it on animals and sea kings is the only thing I can do but on humans…that's a different thing. Well controlling them is pretty easy but killing them is hard work. It's like carrying tons of water using only your fingers! Why is blood so heavy? Sometimes I only make their blood in their brains clot causing them death. I try not to use my devil fruit ability and use it only on needed occasions such as hunger and when facing death.
Mostly hunger.
And then there's my daggers, can you believe I have like 6 daggers? 4 are hidden in my shoes, one's in the right elbow, one's in the left wrist. But those in the right elbow and left wrist only has the blades so I wouldn't call it a dagger.Then there's my katana and I have two curved swords on my back.Too many weapons, aye? I'm planning on getting a large sword like Jack used to have.But for my hand-to-hand combat? Suckish. Extremely suckish. If I don't have Observation haki even a fly could punch me and knock me out. I have extremely bad defenses. I'm really not good with defense. I just said the same thing twice. I'm thinking about too many stuff… I'm Freckles' subordinate now, huh? That's deep fudge. Life's such an arse.
I'm thinking too much things.
Arghh…my brain can't even process my own thoughts..
I need m-more food!
"A'ight, things turned out pretty good for you. You're my subordinate now." Ace said smiling, making her snap out of her self-talking.
"I guess."
"First things first, we need to find you a room." He said. "I'll ask Marco if there are any rooms availa—"
He fell asleep. Shiro chuckled and patted his head.
"I'll just ask him myself, captain." she said and left the sleeping man.
Marco was standing by a corner.
I don't know if I should call him by his name so I just tapped his shoulder.
"Shiro, what is it, yoi?" he asked.
"Freckles fell asleep. He said something about asking you if there are any rooms left." She said and pointed to Ace who was still snoring like a pig.
He sighed.
"Well now that you've mentioned it, there are no rooms left. Each room is already packed. The family's been growing bigger and bigger now. There's no room to sleep in."
She buried my face into her hands. I have no room to sleep in. Everybody hates me. What have I gotten myself into? I don't expect everyone to like me but I didn't expect everyone to hate me.
"Are you crying?" Marco asked.
She looked at him. "No, I don't cry over small things...I'm just tired that's all." She said. "Can I sleep on deck though? And can I at least have some blankets?"
"…can I at least have some blankets?"
Marco blinked.
He didn't expect her to take this seriously.
Most people would complain, some'll ask if they could sleep in the infirmary, and they were grown men for goodness sake! But she asked if she could sleep on deck. We're the Whitebeard pirates, Marines'll probably try to kill us every second they can. And we're in the New World where the seas have their own common sense. Even sleeping on deck at night can be extremely dangerous.
Maybe Pops' right, there is something different about her. Besides that familiar aura around her, and having the guts to sleep on deck.
Guess I'll find out soon.
This was supposedly a joke for newbies (the original joke was making them find a dragon which was Thatch's idea but we lost too many members because of that)…but there really is no room left. Well there's Thatch's room but…never mind, I'll just ask Oyaji if she can sleep in one of the commander's rooms (a.k.a. Thatch's room).
"You're really gonna sleep on deck?"
She frowned. "Don't tell me it's not allowed."
"Well no but, there are sea kings and a lot of possibilities that the Marines or other pirates attack us."
She smiled. "Don't worry I can handle myself."
"I'm sure you can handle yourself out there Shiro but, you're one of Pop's daughters now. This means we're family. And I couldn't possibly let my sister freeze her ass off on deck."
He smiled at her, she smiled back.
"Besides," Marco jerked his thumb backwards pointing to Oyaji's direction." The old man will kill me if I let you sleep on deck."
A/N: Well this is the first chapter. This is my first OP fanfic! The first chapter's kinda lame…
I don't know how to portray Whitebeard, Ace and Marco as well as the other crew members. I'm not Eiichiro Oda for goodness sake! But I wish I was. I think I'm gonna make it have teeny bit of Romance. But not sappy lovey-dovey romance, don't want that. Oh yeah and her devil fruit ability is Chi Chi no mi (Blood blood fruit) Paramecia. She can control blood. And she can control people like Doflamingo.
So blah biddy blah blah blah. I have some things I'd like to discuss and how can you say this, explain, expound, WHATEVER.
Q#1: Why would Edward Newgate, a famous pirate, would let an unknown stranger on his ship?
The old man is insane. Yes, that's the main point of this. Actually Ace was "adopted" even if he was trying to kill the old man. Nobody understands his logic except those who have been with him for a long time.
Q#2: Why were the crew members harsh on Shiro but when Ace was taken in they treated him extremely nice and immediately accepted him, considering the fact he was trying to assassinate Oyaji?
That's for me to know and for you to find out. Mwahahaha! But- in all seriousness and seriosity...you'll find out,EVENTUALLY.
Q#3: How in the fricking hell can a seven year-old kill 37 men? I mean seriously, when Luffy was 7 he was a weak crybaby, that's just Mary-Sueism!
Well, you'll find that out eventually too. Yeah it's impossible for a kid to commit a massacre but the One Piece world is a cruel world. And you know when reporters can't get any news and they make local stories more interesting? Yeah it also concerns that.
Q#4: The Moby Dick is soo freaking huge how can she possibly NOT have a room left?!
The simple answer is: the family grows larger and larger, yeah some die from diseases,getting killed in battle,accidents etc. but their captain justlovesdoubling their family size by recruiting a lot of men some from the islands they own and some from strong-willed men who wan't to join.
Q#5: Why is Ace and Oyaji alive but Thatch is dead? Do you hate him?!
I love love love love Thatch. He's one of the most awesome people on One Piece even though he showed up in I dunno one or two episodes. But as they say: Murder your babies. No I didn't murder Thatch dammit! But sometimes that part you wrote about that you are proud of writing needs to be removed from the story to make it better. NO Thatchy-kins isn't useless! He's the most aweso- sorry ranting bout Thatch now back to my point. I just need it for my story...to someone dear to be lost and to tell you it will never be OYAJI! So...arff! don't make me guilty! I absolutely love him but- yeahhh
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