Lol here's my fic that I've changed. So it should be better than it was
before, but I've took out a lot of characters. And before any one says it,
I know James's parents were alive when he went to Hogwarts, but there's a
point to this story line; which won't be found out till the later chapters,
lol enjoy!
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James Potter sat staring out the window of the Hogwart's express; watching as most the families said their final goodbyes. The train soon started, and many students rushed on, just as the train pulled out and left the station. Just as the families disappeared from view, the door of the compartment slid open, and a young boy walked in, looking a bit like James, but his hair was straight, and not messy like James's, but the same black shade; but his eyes were a bright blue instead of hazel.
'Hi,' he smiled 'anyone sitting there?' he asked, pointing to the seat opposite James.
'No,' he glanced at James, and then sat down looking quickly out the window.
'Err hello,' a boy with sandy coloured hair, and grey eyes walked in. 'Mind if I come in? I'm Remus Lupin.'
'Sure, I'm Sirius black.' Grinned the boy next to James.
'I'm James Potter.' James muttered.
'I know you,' muttered Sirius, 'you were in the papers.' He paused and a sympathetic look came across his face, 'I'm sorry about you're parents.'
'It's okay,' muttered James looking down, 'I get that a lot.'
Silence had took over the compartment, till the door slide open, revealing a greasy dark figure.
'Well,' said the dark figure, coming in with girls, 'If it isn't sad air head Potter, with a merry band of idiots. Seen the dark lord lately?
'Get lost Snape,' growled Sirius through gritted teeth.
Snape glanced at him, 'I never thought I would see the name of Black tarnished by the likes of you. If you want to stay in your family's good book's, I suggest you stay away from this gryffindor scum.'
'You're the only scum around here growled Sirius.
'You want a fight Black? Bring it on!' growled a girl with golden hair.
'No Emma he might hurt himself.' Smirked a girl with dark black hair with blue highlights.
'But Jess,' moaned the girl.
'We'll get him later.'
'Yeah you're right, he's not worth it,' she smirked. 'Even my cat could beat him, let's go.'
The girls shot evil glares at the boys, before leaving.
'Look Snape's not got his girlfriends to protect him, let's get him!' Growled Sirius jumping up, but suddenly he stopped dead as a voice echoed through the compartment.
'Snapie you will leave now, or everyone will no your worst fear. And your parents won't be pleased about who you're dating.'
Snape suddenly paled, 'Who said that?'
'Your worst nightmare,'
'Mummy!' screamed Snape, running out the compartment.
'Wow he scares real easy.' Laughed Remus.
'He almost wet himself,' smiled Sirius.
'Who's there?' smiled James, looking round for the source of the voice.
A girl suddenly appeared, with a cloak in her hands. 'Oh,' she moaned, 'you ruined my fun.'
Sirius grinned walking up to her, 'I'm Sirius Black, and that's James and Remus." Sirius smirked holding out a hand.
She smiled taking his hand, 'Well nice to meet you, I'm Becky Beve. I'd love to chat longer but I've got to go buy that guy some shampoo and pranks to do.' She gave them a smile, before putting the cloak over her and disappearing.
Just as she disappeared; a boy with a rat face walked into the compartment.
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All done, I know its lame but I hope you liked it. Please review.
See yas
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James Potter sat staring out the window of the Hogwart's express; watching as most the families said their final goodbyes. The train soon started, and many students rushed on, just as the train pulled out and left the station. Just as the families disappeared from view, the door of the compartment slid open, and a young boy walked in, looking a bit like James, but his hair was straight, and not messy like James's, but the same black shade; but his eyes were a bright blue instead of hazel.
'Hi,' he smiled 'anyone sitting there?' he asked, pointing to the seat opposite James.
'No,' he glanced at James, and then sat down looking quickly out the window.
'Err hello,' a boy with sandy coloured hair, and grey eyes walked in. 'Mind if I come in? I'm Remus Lupin.'
'Sure, I'm Sirius black.' Grinned the boy next to James.
'I'm James Potter.' James muttered.
'I know you,' muttered Sirius, 'you were in the papers.' He paused and a sympathetic look came across his face, 'I'm sorry about you're parents.'
'It's okay,' muttered James looking down, 'I get that a lot.'
Silence had took over the compartment, till the door slide open, revealing a greasy dark figure.
'Well,' said the dark figure, coming in with girls, 'If it isn't sad air head Potter, with a merry band of idiots. Seen the dark lord lately?
'Get lost Snape,' growled Sirius through gritted teeth.
Snape glanced at him, 'I never thought I would see the name of Black tarnished by the likes of you. If you want to stay in your family's good book's, I suggest you stay away from this gryffindor scum.'
'You're the only scum around here growled Sirius.
'You want a fight Black? Bring it on!' growled a girl with golden hair.
'No Emma he might hurt himself.' Smirked a girl with dark black hair with blue highlights.
'But Jess,' moaned the girl.
'We'll get him later.'
'Yeah you're right, he's not worth it,' she smirked. 'Even my cat could beat him, let's go.'
The girls shot evil glares at the boys, before leaving.
'Look Snape's not got his girlfriends to protect him, let's get him!' Growled Sirius jumping up, but suddenly he stopped dead as a voice echoed through the compartment.
'Snapie you will leave now, or everyone will no your worst fear. And your parents won't be pleased about who you're dating.'
Snape suddenly paled, 'Who said that?'
'Your worst nightmare,'
'Mummy!' screamed Snape, running out the compartment.
'Wow he scares real easy.' Laughed Remus.
'He almost wet himself,' smiled Sirius.
'Who's there?' smiled James, looking round for the source of the voice.
A girl suddenly appeared, with a cloak in her hands. 'Oh,' she moaned, 'you ruined my fun.'
Sirius grinned walking up to her, 'I'm Sirius Black, and that's James and Remus." Sirius smirked holding out a hand.
She smiled taking his hand, 'Well nice to meet you, I'm Becky Beve. I'd love to chat longer but I've got to go buy that guy some shampoo and pranks to do.' She gave them a smile, before putting the cloak over her and disappearing.
Just as she disappeared; a boy with a rat face walked into the compartment.
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All done, I know its lame but I hope you liked it. Please review.
See yas
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