Hey guys I'm back and this is another attempt at writing a decent enough Naruto story that won't result in him being that OP that he destroys anyone he faces.
But hey guys, what you been up to lately?
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto and I'm glad you all know I don't. If I was I would have killed Sakura when Sasuke knocked her out. Who needs raving Fan girls that follow the 'Cool guy' when someone that has saved your life multiple times and is still keeping his promise to retrieve your 'Love' is right in front of you. I Hate Sakura, but that won't be shown in this fic, unless you want me to :)
The Hidden Shinobi: The Start!
(The Night after the Graduation of the newly promoted Genin)
"If you lay a hand on my sensei again, I WILL KILL YOU!" Screamed a young blonde about the age of 11 as his sensei lay on the floor with a demon shuriken in the middle of his back.
"You really think you can step up to me damn Kyuubi brat." An older man with white hair and in a Chunin outfit said through stifles of laughter.
"I do! Every time you hit me or my sensei, I will hit you a thousand times back." The certain blonde said as his hands formed a cross at the front of his Orange and Blue jump suit.
The said silver haired Chunin couldn't reply however as he was suddenly surrounded by hundreds of Blondes that all launched themselves towards the Chunin.
(Screams and Moans)
Bevelling at the feet of the young blonde was the said Chunin who looked like he just got pummelled by a speeding bulldozer and was unforgivingly sent soring into the ground.
"Looks like I got him huh, Iruka Sensei." The Blond said who had one of his heart warming smiles plastered on his face.
The now identified Iruka was gobsmacked. Stood before him was the reason his parents dies, the dobe of the academy and the dead-last that couldn't do anything. Yet here he was defending his Sensei like any normal student would.
"Hey Naruto, Close your eyes for me would you?" Asked Iruka as he sat there waiting for a reply.
The now identified Naruto nodded his head and complied with his sensei's orders.
"I'm so proud of you Naruto; you have potential that is certain." Iruka thought to himself as he untied his Forehead Protector with a metal plate and a symbol of a swirl with an arrow coming of the top.
He placed the Forehead Protector into Naruto's hands and smiled to himself as to what the reaction of the Blond would be.
"You can open your eyes now Naruto." Iruka finished just as Naruto felt what was in his hand. Naruto's eyes shot open like a flash as they eyed the protector. His eyes started water from tears of joy and jumped about unconditionally screaming how now he would be Hokage.
"Don't you worry Iruka sensei; I will make you and the village proud of me!" He shouted as tears were falling from his chin to the floor.
"I know you will Naruto, you will be a great Ninja to the Village" Iruka said as he slowly rose from his seated position and walked slowly with Naruto back to the Village after fetching out the demon Shuriken.
(Hokage Mansion)
"Well the gaki did well. He has the guts to never give up and I can see there is a lot of talent stored away in young Naruto." A tall man around 6ft with white hair in a ponytail that drops to his mid torso said.
"Well Jiraiya I will agree with you there. It makes one wonder why I didn't take into note that he may have too much chakra to be able to perform a simple clone, it would be difficult for most Chunin with that chakra reserve to do it." The reply from the croaky voice of Hiruzen Sarutobi said.
"Well if you don't mind, I now have changed my plans for the gaki. I was going to train him after the Chunin exam or half way through it. However, I think I owe the kid a bit of family for everything he has been through." Jiraiya said sadly as he thought of why he was never there for the kid.
"Well your change of mind has come quickly but Kakashi is not going to be pleased when he finds out he can't train his sensei's son. Still he will probably have to pass his team because of the Uchiha anyway so I don't see anything wrong with it." Hiruzen said with disgust at the council for being so lenient when it comes to Uchiha.
"Well you let me handle Kakashi, but I will be damned if the council have a say in me training the boy. I was left to be his guardian yet I still wasn't allowed to take him with me for my reas… Erm, I mean spying for information about Orochimaru." Jiraiya quickly covered up before he let his former sensei know about his 'Habits'.
"Well I can't argue with that. Sure you can train Naruto and make sure you unlock all of the kid's potential, do you want his record so you can see what he is good at?" Hiruzen said while chuckling to himself because of the last time he read Naruto's records all it would say was 'No proficiency at anything!'
"No, I think I will pass and tell him tomorrow. I need to catch up on my 'Research' for a few hours anyway." Jiraiya whispered the last part to himself and started to imagine the bathhouse that he loved ever so much.
"When you get caught I'm not being responsible for you getting beaten up." Hiruzen replied flatly.
"You're dealing with Master Jiraiya the gallant, the master of stealth and famous Author." Jiraiya said with striking a pose and dancing like a psychopath.
Hiruzen just shook his head as he watched Jiraiya disappear through the window in a white blur. "I wish he would just use the door."
Seconds later there could be screams, explosions and cry's being heard from a certain bathhouse as a white blur of hair was shot into the air and over the Hokage monument with anime tears streaming down his eyes.
"When will he learn the fool?" Hiruzen chuckled to himself before smashing his head off of the desk that was covered in arrays of Paperwork.
(The Next day at the Academy)
Naruto strolled through the town with his head held high and his goggles were replaced with his new Forehead Protector.
As he was walking all the eyes of the villagers were glaring at him and loud whispers could be heard from what Naruto could make out sounded like 'Why did they let the demon child be a ninja' and 'He could kill us all'
Still, after hearing all of the comments from the people of the village were making, he still ignored them and carried to walk down with his ever heart-warming smile still present.
As he entered the Academy he decided to take his time and slowly made it to his class. When he entered he got questioning looks from all the students that were present.
"Hey Naruto, what are you doing here? This is for people that passed the exam." Came a question from a certain pineapple haired Genin.
"What's on my head Shikamaru, or is it invisible?" Naruto responded accordingly in the same manner he was addressed with.
"Tch… Troublesome, but I don't care." Shikamaru responded before lowering his head back to the desk for a nap.
However he didn't get long to rest because he was rudely interrupted by the two Sasuke fan girls Ino and Sakura as they barged each other through the door to the class room.
"Ino-pig, I'm sitting next to Sasuke-kun." Screamed the Pink haired Banshee but before Ino could retort Iruka came in and ushered them both to take a seat.
"Now then class, it is the time of my life when I can finally say to all of you that I'm proud to have taught such an amazing class and I know you will all be an amazing generation of Shinobi. So now it is time to issue you to your teams, first we have team one… team seven will be Sakura Haruno , Sasuke Uchiha and..." Iruka began but was cut off by a very loud member of the class.
"Yes! See Ino-pig, true love wins" Sakura screeched causing the surrounding students and Iruka to wince at how loud she was.
"As I was saying…. The final member of team 7 will be Sai and Sensei will be Kakashi Hatake." Iruka finished (all the teams are same except for team 7 as they are in the manga/anime.)
"Iruka, you didn't give me a team to be in." Naruto pouted because he thought had forgotten about him.
"I'm surprised your even here, what did you do steal the hetai-it?" Sakura said which caused an irritated tick mark on Naruto's forehead.
"I'm here because I passed a harder exam than all of you so shut up Sakura!" Naruto shouted back finding it hard to control his anger towards the pink haired girl that he fancied throughout his Academy life. However that was about to change starting from now.
"That's enough both of you. Naruto, Hokage wants to speak to you about your sensei so you need to go to the tower and see him." Iruka explained as Naruto was leaving the classroom
(Hokage tower)
Naruto was still pissed at Sakura and the fact he had to travel to find his sensei. He arrived at the door of the office and instead of knocking he just barged straight in and saw three white haired men in the office. One man's hair was spiky and he had his hetai-it over his left eye and a face mask over his mouth. He was wearing the traditional uniform for a Jounin and had white tape around his left arm and right leg. The next man was a tall man with waist-length, spiky white hair usually tied back into a pony tail, with two shoulder-length bangs that framed both sides of his face. He also had red lines that ran down from his eyes. He wore a green short shirt kimono and matching pants; under which he wore mesh armour that showed out of the sleeves and legs of his outfit. The last man was known around the world as the 'God of Shinobi' Hiruzen Sarutobi.
(Half an hour before Naruto's burst in)
Kakashi was stood in the Hokage's office with a dishevelled look on his face that showed he had last the argument. Still though, he was pissed because he could teach his sensei's son Naruto Uzumaki but had to comply with the Hokage's orders.
"Hokage-sama who is Naruto going to be with then?" Came the reply from an angry Kakashi
"Mine" replied Jiraiya in an equally aggressive tone that told Kakashi that he wasn't getting Naruto
"I understand Jiraiya-sama, I will be leaving now to my team then." Said the response from Kakashi as he let his eyes wonder to the floor
"Ok Kakashi, I know you wanted to train Naruto yourself but I have taken it upon myself as the child's guardian to train him properly now." Jiraiya said to try and lighten the situation but was failing miserably.
(Present time)
"Hey there kid, come to meet your new sensei." Jiraiya said as he couldn't keep the massive grin off of his face.
"I am mister but Jiji, where is my team?" Naruto questioned the Hokage as if he was he Grandson. Naruto didn't notice that Kakashi had left through the Window to try and not interrupt the moment.
"Well Naruto, your new sensei is stood right next to me. His name is-"However, Hiruzen couldn't finish as Jiraiya stepped in.
"I'm the great toad charmer from Mt Myobokuzan, the legendary Master Jiraiya" He said finishing where his sensei was interrupted.
Naruto looked flatly at the man called Jiraiya before turning a quizzical look towards the Hokage. "He Jiji, can I have a sensei that doesn't act like a complete fool?" Asked Naruto
Hokage looked at Jiraiya as he face vaulted to the floor. He then let out a chuckle at Naruto's comment before answering. "Well boy, believe it or not Jiraiya is a Legendary Sannin and one of the strongest Shinobi the Leaf Village has." He replied Cooley as Naruto got an unquenchable flame of 'Awe' in his eyes.
"I'm sorry Jiraiya sensei. What are you going to teach me, some cool new Jutsu?" Naruto asked while trying to conceal his excitement but was failing miserable.
Jiraiya recovered from his agonizing face vault to reply to Naruto's question. "Hold your horse's Gaki, first we need to work on things that need improving first like your chakra control and Taijutsu but I will teach you a new Jutsu all in good time."
Naruto Physically deflated but then soon shot back up with determination in his eyes. "Hai, well then we best get started soon than so I can become the strongest Hokage there has ever been." Naruto replied
"Well then, I will meet you at Training ground 1 so we can begin your new quest at master Hokage then shall we?" Jiraiya chuckled before they both headed out of the window towards the training ground.
Hiruzen noticed they had gone and reached into his draw to pull out a book that was covered in orange and called 'Icha icha' Beach edition. He flipped the first page but to his displeasure it was too much to handle as blood shot from his nose and he collapsed off of his chair with a cheeky grin on his mouth that told you he just read something kinky.
Well hope you liked the new story, I decided to give Naruto to Jiraiya as I have read a few story's where Jiraiya has been he sensei to start with and Naruto hasn't been over powered but he has been stronger than nearly all the characters which is the perspective I want to give out.
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PEACE ~~~Crumpetz~~~
