Ice Commander of Forces and Personal Assassin for Chaos
Disclaimer: I don't own PJO or HOO (sadly) all Rick Riordan's fabulous ideas. Please don't write nasty comments about this only good and helpful criticism as this is my first fanfic. Hope you enjoy!
Chapter 1
Ice P.O.V
I watched my prey back slowly into the corner, as I advanced.
"Please forgive me and give me another chance at life!" the man cried.
"Chaos nor I give beings more than one chance, and you blew your chance. Meaning you deserve to die!" I spat out, my words dripping with venom. "You killed innocent children for fun, tortured women until they begged to die and split family's for no reason, Xadima. You are the most cold-hearted beast I have ever met!" my tone was laced with anger, as I yelled at the top of my lungs at him. My prey cowered in the dark, musky corner. I took the last step and seized him by the scruff of his neck, leaning in I murmured into his ear "Have fun in hell," as my sword pierced his heart. It gave one final pump and then stopped, letting go I let the now lifeless form of the previous Sinwatra's leader fall to the ground in a crumpled heap. Blood flowed freely from the gaping wound I had left in his chest, slowly dying his clothes and feathers a sparkling Scarlett red. Laughing I turned away from my successful mission and strode - with an air of importance around me- towards my motorbike. I swung my leg over and kicked the gas pedal, it roared to life. The tire's squealed in protest as I made my way over the Sinwatra's moss covered land, ground churned up behind me as I raced a long at a blinding speed to my ship.
Soon enough my spaceship came into view, looming over everything near it. It was a glorious warship with it's sleek, glossy black paint and the sybolm of Chaos printed onto the side, ( a deep blood red sword with black and red coloured star's circling it,) my ship was also heavily armed with guns, electric darts (that if shot at the right place was instant death), fire bombs (that exploded on contact with anything except for our own people/ships as it was specially rigged too sense a persons loyalties or who the ship was crafted by and if your loyalties laid with either Chaos or me BANG! you were no more and only one person crafted our ships so it wasn't't really hard to rig that up), powerful water jets (that could blast straight through you) and well any other dangerous mechanisms that could be on a warship.
My feet hitting the metal ramp as I pushed my motorbike was one of the few things that broke the eerie silence. As soon as I was fully on board and the ramp was shut a voice rang out, "Mission a success Master?"
"Yes they always are Eddie," I replied.
A few minutes awkward silence filled the air and I was tempted to break it; however Eddie beat me to it.
"Lord Chaos called while you were out he said he has a new mission for you, but you might not like it he will tell you the mission once we are at home on the planet of Chaos."
That made a change it was usually Eddie to tell me if I had a mission straight after another not Chaos, my new mission must be really hard if Lord Chaos himself had to tell me. And for the whole 2 day ride home I was left wondering what this new mission could be?
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