This is my first English fiction which it isn't my first language. I want to apologize if I used wrong grammars in any sentences or miss spelling. Please read&review.
What happened when the BAU team found tracks about the mysterious unsub who had killed by copying their cases. Could the team catch him? Or the unsub will get them first? Who's his really target?
I do not own Criminal Minds
Here we are
Chapter 1
"Damn it! Why is it so fucking hurt? What happened? What is the fucking noise ringing in my ears? Turn the light on, I can't see anything!"
"Rossi? Rossi? Did you hear me? Rossi! Talk to me! Open your eyes! Damn it! Rossi, are you alright?"
"What the hell? Who's shouting on me?"
"Rossi? Wake up please." She used her index and middle fingers to feel his pulse again. "Thank God! He still has pulse." She found blood had poured down on his left side of abdomen, suddenly took off his bulletproof vest and checked out for any injuries on his body. The deep cut at his abdomen seemed like the major injury that cause him unconscious other than several small cuts on his hands, arms and cheek. She pressed both of her hands hardly to stop bleeding that didn't show any sign to stop. She wasn't sure how deep the cut was, but first she had to find the way to stop bleeding before he'd lose his blood to death. She took his shirt off and used as a bandage tied around his abdomen.
"Damn it, Rossi! Wake up! Open your eyes right now! Do you hear me?"
"Gosh, somebody help! We're in here!" she surely knew that nobody could hear her from the inside of a square room with thick stone walls. Did the rest of the team know that we were in here? Did they notice by now that she and Rossi were missing? The unsub was better than they thought. How long he had planned this? Had this really happened?
"Argh…" His grumble pulled her out of her thought.
"Rossi? Are you awake? Rossi? Please tell me you're alright."
"JJ?" He grumbled without open his eyes. His eyelids were too heavy to open and he needed to sleep. He heard her voice, she seemed fine, didn't she? He felt hurts all over his body especially his left side. He tried to think what had happened.
All he remembered was the team got into this house to search for the unsub, the mysterious unsub, who murdered all his victims by copying their cases, some was mouth saw shut, some was leg's cut off. They'd found this house by tracking the plate of the unsub's truck that showed in the traffic camera at the night of his recent murdered. The team separated to search in every rooms in the house. Hotch and Morgan searched for the living room and kitchen, Reid and Blake went upstairs, he and JJ went to the cellar. Everything was clear, the unsub wasn't here. JJ was searching for something unsub might had left in a laptop, he was looking around when something flashed in his eyes, the only one picture frame in the room, the black and white picture of a man at middle age. "Hmm…have I seen this man before?" he thought himself. He reached to the frame and pulled it off from a wall, then his eyes focus on the other thing on the wall which was covered by the frame, a small button. He called out for JJ and she was standing beside him just in a second. They shared a look at each other, thinking the same thing. He gave her a nod while pulling his pistol out of the holster, flashlight in his left hand. She pushed the button then a thick stone hiding door was opened. They stepped inside, led by him into another dark room, the door was shut just a second after JJ stepped inside. They turned back to the door, tried open it but nothing happened.
"Shit!" he cussed as spinning around tried to find the other way to open it. He was froze when he point his flashlight to the right wall of the dark room, reached for JJ who was searching for any button on the wall behind him. "What is it, Ross…?" her last word was lost as she turned around and saw what he'd seen before. She opened and shut her mouth couple times, "Gosh!" that was the only word came out from her mouth. He reached for switch to turn the light on for clearly visions about what they had been seeing. Their pictures, the pictures of everyone in the BAU team including Strauss, and several of his victims' pictures hung on the wall. "What the hell…?" JJ finally spoke out. "Yeah, really hell." He seemed like spoke to himself more than JJ. The unsub had been targeting them all the time, everything was make sense now. The ways he'd killed, the victims' MO duplicated their solved cases invited the BAU team to investigate. All were his plans!
"Do you hear that?" JJ's question pulled him out of his thought. "Seems like it comes from under this table." He told her as pointing at the table in front of them. He bent down on his knee to see what was cause of this sound and wished that wasn't the sound as he was thinking. Too late for his wishing, the clock that was connected with the C4 under the table was ticking, showed that they'd had 13 seconds left. "The bomb! Come here, JJ!" He was shouting as reached for JJ's hand and dragged her to the far corner across the room, then flipped the steel table on its side to covered them. The bomb had exploded at the same time that he was covering JJ with his body from the blast.
"That's right, the blast! JJ? Is she alright?" He tried to open his eyes. He needed to check if JJ was alright.
"Rossi? Do you hear me? Can you open your eyes? Rossi?"
He tried harder to open his eyes, he had to blink several times to adjust his visions. "JJ…" he finally spoke out though it seemed like a whisper. "Are you alright?"
"Yeah, I'm fine, Rossi." She forced herself to smile at him. "Always a gentleman, huh? You're the one who'd hurt though you still worried about the other." She cupped his face with her hands "I'm fine. How about you? Where do you hurt?"
"I…argh…"
"Don't move, Rossi! You've lost a lot of blood. I found a big wound on your left abdomen which is still bleeding and several small cuts mostly on your left side. Anywhere else do you hurt?"
"I…no…I don't know. I don't think so."
"Good. I try to stop your bleeding, it seems almost stop now but you shouldn't move. Alright?"
"When the hell you think you are a doctor, ma'am?"
"Just ten minutes ago, sir."
Another chapters will come soon. Thanks for read and review.