So, after reading this story over, and it being about 5 years later, I decided to edit the chapters. I am no longer proud of this supposed rewrite; it's cringey as is the original. I do like some parts of what I written and like what I was trying to do but too many words are either missing, mis-spelt or things are just far too rushed. I want to fix these things without changing the actually plot I had going.

However, what I am wondering is this: Should I post my edits here or make a new 'story' all together? Please let me know what you think. I've posted a preview of the rewrite in The Collection Pack. It's what I had done at the time but I'm actually almost done with chapter one. Oh and by the way, this is a rewrite of the first version; as for a moment I forgot this was the rewrite. Anyways let me know what you think, please. Keep this as it is -as i will for those that still like it- or 'delete' the chapters in favor of the rewritten stuff I'm doing now. Just to pinpoint, though I've had writers block for a long time, my writing itself has improved in the last 8-5 years.