This is my first MLP fanfic, its short chapter, I know, but I'll be posting more chapters. I would be happy for advice, negative reviews are welcomed, it will teach me to learn from my mistakes.
"Soarin, get over here, we still need to practice!" Spitfire yelled as Soarin, clearly pissed off at him. Soarin was too busy stuffing his face with pie, he did not hear her call his name. Spitfire rolled her eyes, took the pie away from him and threw it away.
"H-Hey! That was apple pie!" Soarin said complaining, his face a little messy from the pie. Spitfire rolled her eyes and said, "You have been stuffing your face with pie all day, we need to keep practicing. Now lets do the new technique we've been working on."
Soarin shrugged and flew in the air with Spitfire. They both took off in opposite directions at very high speed. They both then flew higher into the air and started going straight towards each other at very fast speed. A normal audience will think they will crash into each other. Then at the last second they motioned there bodies so that they pass smoothly through each other with no physical contact. They then landed on the ground and both of them folded their wings.
"That was perfect!" Spitfire said smiling. Last time they did this they crashed into each other and were bruised for a week. Since the rest of the team were off today, it was only Soarin and Spitfire. They sometimes will practice on their off days if they are practicing a new move.
Soarin smiled and said full of pride, "Well, of course it was, why wouldn't it be?"
"Oh I don't know, maybe it's because we crashed into each other and you were complaining about your wings." She said to him jokingly.
Soarin pushed her playfully. "Haha, very funny, but seriously that did hurt."
Spitfire just rolled her eyes and smiled. Soarin usually complains about a lot of things, though they rarely argue with each other. They were both still in their WonderBolts uniform. Soarin then just realized something, he never actually saw her without the uniform on her. He didn't know why he just realized this. Hell, he never saw her face before. He then shook his head. "Snap out of it!" he thought to himself. He never told anyone yet but he has feelings for Spitfire. When he first met here, his heart skipped a beat when he heard her voice and saw her orange eyes.
"Earth to Soarin! Are you there buddy?" Spitfire said to him, waking him from his daydream.
"Huh? What?" He said confused.
"I said practice is over right now, we worked pretty hard we deserve a rest." She said to him smiling.
"Yeah sorry I didn't hear ya there, I was daydreaming." He informed her.
"Daydream? What was it about?" she asked him.
This caught Soarin off guard. "Uh…I daydreamed on how would it be like to live in a world of….pie." he lied to her.
"In a world full of pie?" Spitfire confirmed arching a brow.
Soarin was totally poker-faced. "Yes." He said in a short response.
Spitfire rolled her eyes and giggled, punching him playfully in the shoulder. "You silly Pegasus, should've known. Anyways, I'll be inside if you need me." She informed him smiling and walked inside their HQ. As she was walking in, Soarin noticed her flanks shifting slightly. He stared at them and his wings shot up. Soarin flinched when this happened. He had wingboners before and they were quite embarrassing. He managed to force his wings down and walked in the HQ.
When he came inside the HQ, he noticed Spitfire going into the locker room, about to take a shower perhaps? Soarin sniffed himself and gagged. Yeah, he stank alright, he needed a shower. The thing is is that he really preferred to take showers by himself, while Spitfire just showers with mares on the other side of the shower room. Well, that's what Spitfire told him, though they were all in plain sight. He seemed to be the only one nervous about showering with others. Spitfire doesn't seem to mind at all, as most of the Bolt members considered each other as family, though Soarin heard that there was one incident where a stallion ended up raping a mare in the showers. The stallion was fired and the mare quitted the team. He tried not thinking about that.
He then just shrugged and sat on the couch and watched TV. Usually, when 'fire came out of the shower, she wears something that covers most of her coat, he doesn't know why she does this. He guess that some things should be left alone.
Just as Soarin was about to flip the channel, he heard a yelp, followed by a scream in pain. Uh-oh he thought to himself and rushed towards the locker room.
When he got to the shower area, he saw a yellow Pegasus with an orange mane, he then realized it was Spitfire. She was lying on the floor, with her ankle bent in an unnatural angle.
Soarin rushed towards her. "Spit, what happened?!" he asked her as she picked her up and put her on his back.
"I slipped and twisted my ankle-OW!" she yelled in pain with tears in her eyes.
Many ponies do not know this, but he was a little experienced with medical care. He sat Spitfire down gently on the floor and got some bandages. He started working on her ankle, wrapping it up with bandages. Spitfire looked surprised.
"Soarin, I never knew you had experience with medical care." She said once he was done with her ankle.
Soarin smiled and shrugged. "Yeah, thought that might've not been important." He replied.
"How long will it stay like this?" she asked, flinching when she moved it.
"Well, it's broken, not sprained, which means you will recover quickly, maybe 2 to 4 weeks." He informed her. He then gasped notice Spitfire without her clothes on, she was very beautiful with her golden coat and orange mane, which was flat. This made her look more beautiful. He realized that he has never seen her cutie mark before. It looked like a blazing phoenix. He then shook his head.
"Wow, looks like I'm out of commission for awhile, dammit." She said to herself. She looked at Soarin and smiled at him. She carefully got up and limped towards him and gave him a hug, though she was wet, Soarin blushed and smiled. "Thanks Soar." She said to him.
"No problem." He said and smiled at her.
Alright that's it for now. Like I said, feel free to give advice, positive and negative reviews will be appreciated. And yes, I may have some grammar mistakes, I'll try to fix that.