Hi!

Kid: You do nothing but update.

Me: Yes but hey, its chapter 8

Kid: 8! Ya! Symmetrical chapter! It better be good

Me: You do the disclaimer this time.

Kid: DeathSoulTheKid88 does not own Soul Eater or its characters

Enjoy~

Me, Kid, Stein, Liz, Patty, and Spirit soon came to an abandoned ghost town, just outside the desert. "Ugh, why'd we have to come here, there are ghosts living here." Liz complained while hiding behind Patty. "Don't be silly Liz, its only called a ghost town because nobody lives here, except that witch." Stein explained. "Here, why don't we keep our "base" in a house so that way we could make a plan without wandering around." Spirit suggested. We all stood there, dumbfounded. "Out of all the things you said in your life, that is the smartest one I've heard." Stein managed to say. "Hey, this house looks good!" Kid yelled. I turned around to see him next to a decently big house.

Once we got inside, I set up chairs so we could all talk about what to do next. "Ok, here's what I think we should do. We should all split up and search the whole area. But here's the thing, we all have walkie-talkies that I brought so when one of us find something suspicious, everyone could come to that persons location." Spirit explained proudly. Once again, we all stood dumbfounded. "Man Spirit, you are on a roll aren't you." Stein said. Spirit took six walkie-talkies out and we each took one.

We exited the house and went separate ways. I went forward and I'm now looking at each building, trying to find the witch. Suddenly a tall figure stood in front of me. It looked to be a demon rabbit. It had long, torn up ears and patches of fur missing. It also had long, sharp teeth and blood red eyes. "Guys, I need back up now on the intersection of Angel, and Delaware!" I yelled into the walkie-talkie. I jumped out of the way as it's sharp claws smashed in front of me. It growled like a dog. "Guys! Now!" I yelled even louder. After dodging attack after attack I soon found Kid and Stein running as fast as they can toward me. "What the hell is this thing!?" I shouted over to them. Its claws came after me and I did a backflip, landing next to Kid. "Kid, can I transform now?" I asked him. "I'll catch you." He gave me a smirk. I smiled at him then jumped in the air and transformed. He caught me and did little spins with my scythe blades.

"It's time to get serious." He mumbled. He ran at the demon rabbit and slashed at him with both my blades. The rabbit yowled furiously before running slowly up to Kid with his claws outstretched. Kid jumped to the side and started to run up the rabbit. Kid hit the rabbit in the head before slashing both its ears. "Now all I need to do..." Kid trailed off and started running down its back. I showed myself in the blade reflection. "Kid! This is dangerous what are you doing?" I asked him. "Don't worry, I got this." Kid stopped and stuck both my blades in the rabbit and he stood on the chain.

"Here it is." Kid said. He took off a latch and a little door opened, showing a bunch of controls. Kid switched the one that said power off. Suddenly the demon rabbit started to fall. Kid took out both my blades and jumped off. "Great job Kid." Kid turned around to see Stein walking up to him. Kid threw me in the air and I transformed back. "Hey!" I turned around to see Liz, Patty, and Spirit running towards us. "Your a bit late don't you think?" I told them. "Now, lets head the way Maka was going. She seemed to be on the right track if that thing started to attack her." Stein said, lighting a cigarette. "MAKA!" Spirit rushed towards me and gave me a death hug. "I'm okay papa. Kid and Stein came at the right time." I gasped out. Spirit let go of me and turned to Kid. "Thank you for saving my daughter." Spirit said, a little too serious. "It was fine, after all, what would we do without Maka being here." I blushed at Kid's statement. "Lets go!" Patty yelled, at least 10 yards away. We rushed towards her quickly and continued with the search.

We searched almost the whole city when I spotted a shed. "Hey guys, what about over there." I said. Everyone turned their heads to where I was pointing and pretty much started running towards it. Stein didn't hesitate to break the door down. I gasped at what I saw. A bunch of miniature demon rabbits were lined up with Soul in front of them. "Soul! This is where you were!?" I growled. "Get them!" Soul yelled before back flipping out of the way. "We'll handle things here. You guys go after him!" Stein yelled to me and Kid. We both nodded and started running towards the place where Soul ran off to. Wish us luck. I thought before chasing after Kid.

We soon stopped when we saw this witch and Soul right next to her. I transformed and Kid got me, then got into a battle stance. "Get the shinigami's soul, then the grigori soul." The witch ordered Soul. Soul ran at Kid and changed his arm to a scythe. Kid quickly got out of the way and slashed one of my blades down his back, and one across his back, making a plus shape. Soul yelled in agony. Soul quickly recovered as he absorbed the pain and put it in his punch on Kid's stomach. Now it was Kid's turn to yell in agony. "Well done Soul." The rabbit witch purred. "Kid! Get up!" I yelled from my weapon form. Kid slowly got up. "Now its my turn." With that last word Kid ran up to Soul and kicked him in the face. Soul flew across the room and hit the wall, leaving a dent in it. (Like all those chapters ago..) Soul didn't have time to react as Kid used one of my blades and slashed him across the chest. Blood poured from Soul's wound and he didn't make a sound. Kid picked up Soul with one of my blades and threw Soul across the room, again. Soul landed with a deadly thump and he didn't get back up. "Soul!" Usagi yelled. Usagi looked like she was going to explode with rage. Usagi suddenly grew big claws and her ears turned to blades. "What the hell?" Kid murmured. Usagi just threw her claws together and a ball of energy started to form. The energy ball flew from her hands and hit Kid in the chest. He flew backwards and landed on the floor. He didn't get up. "KID!" I yelled at the top of my lungs. I changed back and looked over him. Blood was coming out of a wound from his chest. It stretched from one side of his chest and down his stomach. Kid started to stir and get up. "Kid your alright." I said in tears. He nodded and started to stand up, only to fall back down again. "What's going on, why cant I stand?" Kid asked himself.

This whole time Usagi was bringing a larger ball of energy towards them.

(Death Room)

Lord Death stood at his mirror, watching sadly. "I'm sorry Kid. I'm so sorry." Then Lord Death started to go through his mirror and awaited for the death that was sure to come. (Start listening to Whispers in the Dark by Skillet right now. I was writing this chapter and thought of that song and turns out, to me, it fits ^^)

I slowly turned around to see Usagi's energy ball flying towards Kid. "Kid! Look out!" I didn't wait for an answer. I ran over to him and pushed him out of the way. I felt fiery pain go through my chest. I dared looked down and saw a whole in my chest. I laughed slightly then fell to the floor. "MAKA!" Kid yelled. He ran over to me then fell right next to me. "Maka! Maka! Wake up! Please don't leave me here!" Kid yelled to me. "Kid... Wherever I go just remember, that your not alone, your never alone. I feel tired right now. I think I'm going to go to sleep. I love you Kid." I slowly started to close my eyes. (Stop music there if you actually listened to it) "Maka! Don't close your eyes." Kid yelled to me. All I saw was blackness. No pain, no light, no nothing, just darkness.

Stein made it through the demon rabbits and started to head towards the witch. Her back was facing towards him. How stupid. He thought. He brought Spirit over his head and sliced her in half, just like that. Her soul started to float where she used to be. Stein watched as Lord Death started to try and take Maka's soul.

"Kid, its her time to go. Just let me see her soul." Kid looked up to see his father. "I will not let you touch her soul." Kid growled. "Kid, I have to, let me see her soul." Lord Death started to reach for Maka's soul. "No!" Kid yelled to him. Lord Death was starting to get pissed by his sons stubbornness. "Kid, last warning. Let me see her soul." Lord Death said darkly. "No." Kid said, tears starting to stream down his face. You leave me no choice son. Lord Death thought. Lord Death got his overly large hand and smacked his son across the face. Kid flew across the room and landed on his side. "No.. Father.. Please don't take her soul.." Kid murmured weakly before blacking out.

So, that is the end of Betrayed! So, I'm sorry if it's kinda short but the other story I'm writing will be a sequel. Like I said before, I already had that story planned out but I had to make things clear so... ya, sorry

Anyway, you should totally listen to that song during that part I mentioned.

So, I hope you enjoyed Betrayed ^^

~Death Soul