Since the day I was born, I was cursed, cursed of life. It was in my view pointless, upsetting, but never worth giving up. The only thing that kept me alive was the fear of going beyond fainting.
I noticed that my life was cursed as a young Shinx.
I used to live near in a small place where water was abundant, and trees where ample whenever I needed to hide from the humans. From up north came the strong scent of honey and flowers. Mother had never let me travel up north, though. South I avoided because it seemed humans were blooming. They built structures high and tall, they flashed with bright colors in the night. I avoided that place because of the amount of humans that lived there.
We lived on a cliff, me, my sister, and my mother. A cave was on the cliff that opened out to the bottom of the cliff.
(In Pokemon Diamond and Pearl this place was called Rugged Path.)
It all started when a human in the middle of the night, a human tramped through the forest of trees, searching for us. Our mother hid us, my sister and me, behind a group of bushes.
"Stay here," she said leaving both of us.
"Mom, wait!" I shouted, watching my mother leaving.
"Look Chimchar, it's a Luxray!" the trainer said.
My sister beside me woke up, and asked," Where's mommy?"
I shushed her and said," She's fighting a trainer."
"Wait, Mommy is fighting a trainer!" she shouted.
I shushed her again and peered through the bushes. I saw the human take out a red and white ball from his belt.
"Go, Roserade!" He shouted, throwing the ball as it grew in mid-air.
It landed with a quiet thud on the ground and bounced once. The ball opened and exploded into a ball of white light and then jumped back to the trainer's hand. A roserade stood in place of the white light. Then my mom ran away, trying to lure the human away from us.
We stood there waiting for our mom. We waited; sleep avoiding us, as the sun started to rise. The sun rose above mount coronet as my hope slowly dwindled. My eyes were starting to water.
"Brother you don't think our mom will lose to a feeble Roserade, do you?" she asked, getting angry at me.
"No, I don't," I lied, I couldn't make her hope fall with mine.
On a battle scale out mother would've lost, not only is she dis-advantaged by type, but she also would have to face whatever other pokemons that trainer had enslaved. Then on top of that, Roserade can be packed to the top with moves like stun spore, toxic, even solar beam, a move that I know would annihilate my mother in a matter of seconds. In truth my mother wasn't going to come back

Note: This is my second story on Fan fiction, the first one sucked so I put it down... Although I have two more on Fiction Press. I hope you guys like this story. I don't know if people will find this enjoyable or not, so please can you review this story, just so I can figure out if people like it. I beg you once more.
Sincerely- Damius