Please forgive me for ...Well everything. This is my first time writing anything ever.I've decided on humor for my first attempt at ...Something if you don't make it through my bad writing please review and tell me why. Constructive criticism please. And here we GO!

*SNORE...SNORE...SNORE* *THUD!* ugh the saiyan groaned but then shot up off the floor with the biggest silliest grin anyone could have. Goku was in high spirits to say the least. With great enthusiasm for someone who woke up falling on the floor, he rushed over to the window and flung it open. It was a beautiful day the sun was shinning and animals playing nothing was gonna get him down today. Today was his 50th birthday of course that didn't mean much to him. what got him excited was that he was invited to "a roast in his honor" and he was told that all his friends would appear and give speeches. So the great saiyan warrior ran to the closet. For the first time in his life eagerly putting on his formal suit. He didn't like the suit but he wasn't gonna let some stuffy suit bar him from going to his own party and ruin his day! Goku:See honey i put on the suit just like you said can we go now? Chichi:Goku it's six o'clock in the morning the party isn't for another six hours go back to bed! Goku: Oh yeah. sorry chichi i'm just really excited for the party. And with that goku laid back down in bed with his suit on.

hey there thanks for reading! i guess you can already see where this is going but please review. also i know this is short but i'll make the next chapter longer (probably) so yeah tell me what you think and if it's funny at all or if i should try something different. oh almost forgot any suggestions for what his friends speeches should be? one more thing did i handle dialog right? like is that the right format? does it make sense when you read it?