How does a new Family sound? More features, real chapters, and better detail and grammar - novel style. I've improved my writing drastically!

So how does a new, more serious version of this? Previously it was a hobby; now Id like to actually take this on and see where it goes. I'm mot a kid anymore and I have the capability for much more, which only increases.

If I get fans here, I'll be prompted. If you are new here or have been a fan from the first day, and only if you truly want this, review. If i get a certain amount of reviews (the number I will draw from a hat) or even more, then it will be before half of the items on my 2016 list and even over completing my latest book!