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Simon's Wonder Chapter 1

I don't own the characters

or Adventure Time

But I do own this story!

[ P.S. I suggest you listen to a love song or some emotional music while reading this. It makes it 120% better ]


I put the car in park, excited to reveal to my fiance what I'd just bought from a Northen dockworker in Scandinavia. It was extraordinary! I'm not really the one to believe in supernatural things, I'm not that kind of person... but this artifact caught my eye. I guess I should tell you who I am. My name is Simon Petrikov, and I'm studying to be an aniquarian of ancient artifacts

"Hello my princess? I'm home!" I called. Betty greeting my by leaping into my arms.

"Hello, Simon!" she said happily. Oh, how I love her! I remember when we first started dating, we would snuggle by the fire... I remember kissing her on the cheek after bringing her home. But the best memory is when I proposed.

"Betty, will you be my princess?" I asked, holding up a diamond ring.

"Yes! Yes!" she cried, and I got up to hug her. I spun her around, and she laughed and cried happily into my shoulder.

It was the best day of my life. Just hearing those words, knowing that she was so sure of me was comforting. Love is amazing.

I put down my case and opened it up, excited. I held up the crown. It was made of pure gold, finely encrusted with small rubies and sapphires. In the front was a great big ruby, probably worth a few thousand dollars, but I wasn't going to sell this beauty.

She looked in awe at it. I thought for a moment. Maybe I could make her laugh, and pretend I was Mayor of 'BettyTown'!

I jokingly placed it atop my head, and she giggled a little.

Out of nowhere, I saw a great bright light, and I was not in the room anymore. I was in a room made of ice, and there was a penguin standing front of me. I looked around. This place gave me the chills! The penguin let out a quack. I walked over to the mirror, and stumbled back. What!

I was wearing a dark blue cloak, and I had blue skin. My nose was long and pointy like an icicle, and I had a big white beard. The penguin let out another quack, and waddled over to stand beside me. I gasped as another vision appeard, I was standing in front of a ruined city. I clung on for life, I had so many flesh-wounds. It was like a bomb had just blew up in front of me eyes! I tried to fight the visions, but they came as fast as they went. Switching scenes, everything was blurred. I felt a huge jolt of lonliness in each one. I shouted at them, fought with them, until I realized it wasn't real it was the crown!

I quickly took it off, and saw my fiance in front of me, looking at me in such contempt. What had I said? What had I done when I wore the crown?

"I never want to see you again."

She ran upstairs and came back down with a suitcase, giving me a last glance of fury before bolting out the door.

What had happened?


It's been three months, and since then I now see the visions always, whether or not I wear the crown. They tell me the secrets, the secrets of the ice and snow, that the power of the crown will save me with it's frost. I don't yet know what this means.

I am frightened, though. My skin has begun to turn blue, and my body temperature is lowering at a supernatural rate, to what is now about thirty degrees celsius. I don't know when it will end... I'm really scared.

I've noticed that around the town, army men and women have been in the streets, travelling through my city. Must be some military thing. I heard on the news yesterday that they were building some sort of weapon, a weapon that would make them certain to win a war that we've been having between some countries. But what I can tell between the visions, is that they're carrying nuclear and toxic objects aswell.

Plutonium is the only object I recognized, but this just adds to my fear. What's the army up to?


Did you like it? Next chapter will be up soon!