AnubisYacker here. I would just like to comment on the season finale of Wolfblood. I feel it left it too soon. I would of liked to see more. Here is how I think it should of ended.

Maddy stared out of the square window, looking at the small micro chip which saved her family.

"You know he loved you right Maddy?" Tom asked, looking at his childhood sweetheart. He knew he had lost her to Rhydian, but he wanted her happiness. He wanted her to be happy. Besides, he now has a new sweetheart. Not that he was going to tell her of course.

"I can't just stand here, I can't just watch him go" Maddy mumbled. She couldn't let him leave. She couldn't let him go. He meant to much to her.

"What?" Shannon asked, confused as to what day it was. it had been eventful. Her friend, her best friend, had lied to her all there lives! How could she do that? Shannon was past angry, she was hurt, crushed and most of all. Upset. All these years Maddy had made excuses about why she couldn't look for the beast, when infact. She was the beast.

"I can't just let him leave Shannon!" Maddy shouted, picking up her jacket and heading towards the door, only to be stopped by Emma.

"Where do you think you're going young lady?" Emma asked, standing infront of the door and flicking her short brown hair out of her face.

"I'm going to stop Rhydian!" Maddy said trying to push past her mum softly, but being pushed back.

"You are to stay away from him!" Her father Daniel warned, holding his fresh cup of black coffee. "We've warned you Madeline!"

"He's in our pack! You can't keep me away from him!" by now Maddy was shouting at her parents. They couldn't keep him away. She only had a limited time to follow the scent before it disappeared and she couldn't let that happen.

"You are not going anywhere!" Emma folded her arms as a warning. But Maddy was not just going to stand around. without warning she pushed her parents out of the way violently and out the slightly open door, causing it to swing open and nearly come off the newly screwed in hinges. Everyone stood silently and stared. Maddy had never ever done anything like that before. Tom and Shannon looked at each other and tried not to laugh at the way Maddy's parents stood, there mouths agape. "MADELINE YOU COME BACK HERE!" Emma boomed, running out of the house without shoes.

After Daniel processed what had happened he stepped backwards and darted out of the room at gwolf speed. Shannon and Tom looked out the window at Emma and Dan running at top speed at, now out of site Maddy.

"Do we go after them?" Shannon asked curiously, feeling very awkward at her and Tom.

"DUH!" Tom began. "I ain't missing this!" with that, Tom ran after the other three with Shannon close behind.

By now, Maddy was half way through the woods following Rhydian's scent. She jumped over logs, twigs and rocks following her nose. She could feel the scent getting stronger, and stronger. Until finally she saw him. He was walking with his mum and brother. She dared to stop for a second and stared at him.

"RHYDIAN!" she screamed, hoping she was loud enough for him to hear. A smile appeared on his face as he heard the faint call. Even though he could see his mother was annoyed, he couldn't just ignore her.

"I need to say goodbye" Rhydian said to her, hoping she would understand. Hoping she would see what he needed to do.

"Goodbyes are for humans!" Ceri spat, tugging on Rhydian's cream coat. "You are a wild wolfblood now. Except it" Rhydian fought to take just one step further away, knowing that if he could, he would be able to go further. But he couldn't. He couldn't step one step further away, from her. He turned on his heels slowly and stared at her deeply, looking for any affection. Seeing her face full of sadness he smiled at her, holding his arms out to her and stepping closer. Maddy darted as fast as she could, sprinting up to him. As she came a few inches away she was grabbed by her waist and pulled backwards, being held at a tight grip.

"LET ME GO!" Maddy screamed, kicking her legs and trying to release herself.

"You broke my order Madeline!" Daniel shouted, dragging her backwards. "YOU ARE HAVING NOTHING TO DO WITH HIM!"

"GET OFF HER!" Rhydian warned stepping forward and pulling Maddy free of her fathers grip. Maddy darted straight into Rhydian's arms as he held her protectively. It was a proper love moment for the.

"You stay out of this Wildy!" Daniel growled taking a step towards the young teens . "You have no idea how much trouble you have caused for us!"

"It's better then being a tame!" Ceri cut in, standing forward and grasping Maddy by the hair. she yanked her back violently.

"MUM! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?" Rhydian boomed. How could his mum do this? What was she thinking!

"I'm teaching these tames a lesson in being wild!" Ceri snapped pulling at Maddy's brown hair with great force, making Maddy bend down to Ceri's level. The anger rushing through Maddy was unbelievable, but she fought to stay human.

"Just let her go mum!" Rhydian's eyes flashed a yellow colour, as well as Emma and Daniel.

"Things are about to get ugly" Shannon whispered to Tom, who nodded and backed away slowly.

"Give me one good reason why I should let her go Rhydian? Why should I let her live to see another full moon?"

"Because-because" Rhydian stuttered, looking at the tears running down Maddy's cheek. "BECAUSE I LOVE HER!"

Silence filled the green filled as the words the young wolf had said sunk in.

"You-you what?" Ceri stuttered, realising Maddy of her grip. "You love, a tame?"

"I always have" Rhydian said softly, wiping a piece of hair out of Maddy's face. "And I always will!". Dan stepped out to speak but was pulled back by Emma, who shook her head gently.

"Dan, look at them. Remind you of anyone?" Emma asked smiling at them. "That was as all those years ago remember?" Dan's face softened as he chuckled under his voice and smiled.

"Sure was" Dan whispered into Emma's ear. "You coming home Rhydian? It's hog roast!" Rhydian chuckled and looked deep into Maddy's eyes, leaning in to kiss her.

"NO!" Rhydian's mum shouted, within a millisecond she was in her wolf form and jumping for Maddy and Rhydian.

Rhydian pushed Maddy protectively as Ceri hit him with great force, knocking him to the ground.

"Rhydian!" the others shouted, trying to rush in and help the poor boy. Rhydian attempted to push the angry, brown wolf off of him but it was no use.

"Someone help him!" Maddy screamed trying to rush and help him, but being held back by Shannon. By now, Rhydian was being attacked by the wolf. He was just conscious. "MAM HELP HIM!" Ceri was biting and scratching at Rhydian's arms and face as he tried to fight her off weakly. Dan pushed Ceri off with great force and snarled at her.

This wasn't going to end well.

CHAPTER 2 SOON! BYE!