I am deeply sorry to say my dear friend SunsetFire, and his mother, were killed in a car crash in August. I am honoring him by bringing his last ideas to life. He left this account to me, because he knew of my ambition to become a writer of a sort.

I will not be continuing his story Immortality doesn't change everything, because I do not know the plot and I do not want to insult SunsetFire's memory. I bring to you The Forbidden Adonis, one of SunsetFire's last ideas he wished to put on the site. He was my best-friend, and I bring you this story and another which will soon be published.

I'm sorry it's short I just tried to write as SunsetFire did, and I'm still learning his techniques. Be on the look out for his other soon to be published story: Born a God.

Introducing The Forbidden Adonis Chapter One: That Funny Feeling


APHRODITE

She daresay she had never felt this feeling before. It was… intense. It was like love, but, 50 times more powerful.

And she definitely knew what love was, she was the goddess of it, she was Aphrodite, goddess of love and beauty. You see it started around August in 1997. She felt this pull, this need to visit Manhattan.

It had her panting, the attraction and lust she felt from that spot was overwhelming. She wanted to, no needed to see what was causing that feeling. When she got to Manhattan, she was definitely not expecting the feeling to lead to the hospital, not to mention that the feeling had led her to a baby.

A newborn in fact, but, it was the most gorgeous baby she had ever seen. He had a beautiful tuft of ebony hair that fell perfectly over the most amazing emerald eyes; they shifted from pure green to the color of the sea.

She could tell he was a demi-god. He radiated pure power and beauty. Aphrodite shrouded herself in mist, enough mist to fog even the clearest eyed mortals' eyes, and posed as a nurse.

When she entered the mother's room she had one goal in mind: find out who this child is. She saw the last name on the "I'm a boy" sticker. Jackson.

"Do you have any idea what to name this boy?" Aphrodite asked his mother, Sally Jackson.

"Perseus. Perseus Samuel Jackson." Sally replied dreamily as she held out her arms to take him.

"Wonderful name." Aphrodite commented as she vowed silently to herself to watch this boy as he grew up. Ancient laws be damned… she would be in his favor.

Because this Jackson boy was someone that would grow up to be the most handsome man in history. She could just tell he would be more attractive than Narcissus, Adonis, and Hercules combined.

"You know, I think I'll call him Percy." She told Sally as she handed him over.

"Percy… yes that will work, thank you miss." Sally replied gratefully.

And Aphrodite left, back to Olympus, to watch Percy grow, every second he lived she watched him, then came the day at the museum…


In memory of SunsetFire an awesome writer, and a wonderful friend. Stay tuned for the next chapter. I promise to try and make it longer.

~SunsetFlare

(I couldn't keep his username, but I wanted to keep a part of him here)