AN: No, I do not own Narnia. If I do, then the Pevensie children won't be sibling and Peter and Susan will be together, Lucy and Edmund too.. OOOPPPPSSS... shouldn't have said that.. some would not want it.. wushu! Stupid WRITER!

No! Don't leave! I beg you, please read this first, then review.. don't worry there is no incest here.. I promise..

A Twisted Story

It has been 3 days after Susan had her bad dream. She had drastically changed, for good of course, that's what everyone thought especially the seven people who were so glad to have her back.

But Aunt Alberta thinks otherwise. She said Susan was back to being plain old Susan. That's probably because she refrains from wearing any make-up, except for formal occasions.

"Susan, I don't mean to pry and I certainly do not want to offend you but… why did you stop wearing make-up?" Lucy once asked.

"I just realized I don't need them. If I'm truly beautiful to others they would notice it even if I do not wear any cosmetics" Susan said, smiling to herself.

"And besides beauty is not based on physical appearances," she added looking at Lucy's face, then placed her hand on her heart "it's the heart that counts."

Lucy shyly replied "Do you think I'm pretty?"

Susan seriously answered "No, not at all," then she laughed when she saw Lucy frowned and put her hands on her sister's chin "I think you're stunning. No. You are dazzling. Remarkably beautiful! And believe me when I say that I even think you are more gorgeous than I am."

After that event Lucy adored Susan even more. She also gained more confidence, receiving such a compliment to the woman she always wanted to be.

Susan also joins them when they talk about Narnia. She shares her experiences with them, and talks about certain people she met along with her adventures and she even gave Eustace and Jill some pointers in using a bow and arrow.

Tonight, as Susan strolls towards her room, when she heard Edmund, Peter and Lucy in the boys' bedroom. They were talking about Narnia,…again.

"Shouldn't we tell Susan about our plans? Lucy said.

I think I've heard this before. Susan thought then she remembered her dream. No. This could not be happening.

"Yeah, why don't you call her Lu?" Peter said.

"She might be interested with this." Said Edmund

"After all, she has been quite involved with these past few weeks" Peter thoughtfully added

Susan heard Lucy's hurried footsteps. She too went to her room immediately, after all she does not want to get caught eavesdropping. She then grabbed the brush and started brushing her hair.

She saw the door flung open, and revealed her little sister. Lucy then started staring at her.

"What is it, Lu?" she asked, a little worried.

"Nothing" answered Lucy. Then after a deep thought, "You are very beautiful Sue, can I , um.. brush your hair?"

Susan laughed but not mockingly, "Of course sweetie, come." She gestured Lucy to come to her.

Lucy silently and adoringly brushed her sister's hair. She seemed to be deep in thought.

"Su, you don't know how happy I am that you do remember Narnia?" Lucy happily said, "And I know Aslan do too. You're amazing, I wish I could be just like you."

Susan turned around to look at her sister "No Lu, don' say that. You are amazing in your own way."

"We are both beautiful then." Lucy said

A long silence was heard in the room until Lucy remembered what she was suppose to tell Susan.

"Oh! I almost forgot, Peter wants to see you. They must have been waiting for long. Come on let's hurry."

Lucy was about rush again to the men's room when Susan called her.

"Lu," Susan started, "whatever's going to happen tomorrow I just have to say that I love you so much, and that I'm proud you are my sister."

Lucy was tearful and rush to Susan to hug her.

"I love you too Su." She said

"Hey! Can we cut in?" Peter asked while a grin crossed his face.

He and Edmund suddenly popped from their bedroom door and startled the two. Edmund was frowning but you can see the smirk he was trying to hide.

"We've been waiting, you know? He said

"And worried when the two of you didn't show up after 10 minutes that Lucy left our bedroom. We thought something happened to both of you." Peter interjected.

"What's with all the drama, anyway?" Edmund asked

"It's a long story and besides it's none of your business." Lucy snapped. She was quite irritated that the two ruined their sisters' bonding. Susan just laughed at their conversations. They decided to just held their meeting at the girls' room.

The day after, Susan was preparing to go. She has packed all the things she needed. It has been decided that she would go with Lucy to meet Eustace, Jill, Professor Kirke and Aunt Polly. She was entering the living room when she saw Edmund look so deep in thought. She quietly slip beside him and stare at him. Suddenly, Edmund spoke.

"Don't you have a date today?" he inquired, then seeing her puzzled face, "I don't mean to pry but you used to be so loud about your relationship with Joseph. How come I haven't even heard his name from you from these past days?"

"We broke up." She simply said

Edmund was surprised but did not push the subject, "Don't you have any important appointments?"

"Actually there's one. I'm supposed to meet up with 4 important people today with my precious little sister and wait for my darling brothers" she said beaming at Edmund who smirks at her too.

"SUSAN!"

"I think you should go now. I don't think your precious little sister could linger any longer." Suggested Edmund. He and Susan stood up.

"Yeah I think I should. And I think you better prepare too before Peter saw you are still ill-equipped." Susan said. Edmund started to strode off after agreeing with her. Then unexpectedly, Susan hugged him from his back.

"And Ed, Thank you. Thank you for understanding me and for pointing out my faults. I love you"

Edmund smiled at her sister's gesture, "Is this what you are doing with Lucy last night? You know I'm not really good at handling drama." He teased.

Susan just let him go and had already turned her heels toward the door when Edmund spoke up.

"I love you too Su."

Susan smiled at his brother who was already walking towards the kitchen.

"Why? I mean you always said you like those kind of guys?" Peter's voice suddenly rang her ears.

"What?" Susan was surprised with Peter's sudden appearance

"I mean you always liked Joseph. Why did you break up with him?

"When I showed him simple old Susan he did not like the change. Turns out he only loves my appearance."

"WHY THAT! I'm going to –"

"No. It's fine. To tell you the truth I'm happy because I don't want to lie anymore. I never really loved him actually. I just used him to forget Narnia. But I don't think I would ever want to forget Narnia again. It's the only truth in the pool of lies."

Peter beamed at her, "Welcome back Su!"

Susan don't know what came to her, he just hugged him tight. Those simple word Peter spoke assures her that she would never be alone no matter what would happen later on. It guaranteed her entry to Narnia as a friend of Narnia again.

"SUSAN! What's taking you so long?" shouted a slightly irritated Lucy

"I better go; I don't want to argue with Lucy along our way. And by the way, thank you for everything Pete, and that I really adore your courage. I love you."

"I love you too Su."

Peter watched as Susan walked towards Lucy. Edmund appeared to his side to watch the girls go. Susan looked back once more and saw the boys looking at them. Lucy followed her action. Both of them waved the boys goodbye.

"See you two at the other side." She said then she started walking again.

"It's supposed to be see you later." Edmund murmured.

"What do you think she meant for saying that?" Peter asked

"I don't know. Maybe she knows something we don't." Edmund answered, also quite puzzled

"What do you mean by 'see you at the other side'?" Lucy asked her older sister

"You would soon know, Lu."

Eustace, Jill, Professor Kirke and Aunt Polly are already present as the sisters arrived. Susan suggested everybody to say everything they need to say to everyone they need to talk to.

"Why?" Eustace asked

"Well, we don't know when our life is going to end. Better say what our honest feelings before it's too late."

"She is right. After all there is no harm in doing that. Let's just comply with her." Professor Kirk stated.

So everyone did as Susan suggested. Upon reaching the station, Susan called their parents. But they were not answering. Maybe they are already aboard the train. So she texted them.

"Mom, I'm not sure what would happen today, but always remember I love you. Tell dad I love him too. And that I am so proud you are my parents. Both of you are great parents.

As the train move, Susan could feel it is stirring faster than usual. Lucy was trembling behind her. She tugged her little sister's hand and looked assuringly at the more frightened youngsters. Eustace and Jill who were holding hands, while the older couple looked at each other with worry.

The train screeched louder. Susan looked at her companions and saw their eyes are shut tightly. She drew all six of them closer before tightly shutting her eyes and wait for the pain to agonize her.

But no pain came. She fluttered her eyes and saw she was standing with her companions minus Jill and Eustace but now Edmund and Peter are with them. They walked, entered a big door, until they are united with Jill and Eustace. They also stumbled to a young man, named Trinian. Jill and Eustace knew Trinian for they had an adventure with him so Peter just introduced Trinian to the others who he doesn't know him.

"These are my sisters, Lucy and Susan, and my brother, Edmund." Peter announced. And the gaily talk continued on and on.

From nowhere, Aslan appeared before them.

"Welcome back Kings and Queens of Narnia! Welcome back Friends of Narnia!" He proclaimed while staring all-knowingly to Susan, who knew what lies behind his word.

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AN: I understand that my story somehow has similarities to other stories.. I haven't really read any of them before writing any chapters of this story, really. To be honest, I was being a little focused on getting the idea out of my mind (cause it troubles me and finals exam is coming up) that I haven't really checked if someone has the same plot. So no, I did not copy them okay.. so everyone is good, right.. :)

And since everyone is good, and this is the last chapter, I asked you, no, I'm actually begging you to review.. please!

Thank you everyone for reading this story.. I really appreciate you guys! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

I'm actually planning to continue this, but maybe it has some incest, it kinda troubles me.. really but maybe if I am not too lazy.. I would,,.. ahahahaha...