Chapter 1 -A Chance

Okay, so I have decided to take down all of the chapters, and start re-posting them, re-written. I know it isn't the most efficient way, but it works for me. Like it said in the description, new chapters will hopefully be coming out in the beginning of May! So if you are waiting for chapter 11, then be patient!

If you are not waiting for Chapter 11, then hello! This is my first fanfiction, so please, no hate! I love the Divergent Series, and I hope you enjoy my fanfiction! Constructive criticism is greatly appriciated, along with reviews :). Enjoy! -Taylor

First? I ranked first! I quickly search the board. Uriah, Christina, Will, I find each of there names on the list. Peter? I search and find his to, but not Molly's or Drew's. Not surprising,I think to my self. I turn to my left and pull Christina into a tight embrace.

"First! Tris, oh my goodness! That's a-maz-ing!" She exclaims pulling out from our hug. I know my face is red from blushing.

"Thanks," is all I can mange to say back. My mind goes to Tobias. I turn around and look for him in the line of trainers and other Dauntless official

My eyes spot him, standing next to Eric, he was already staring at me. When I look at him, he looks embarrassed because I caught him staring at me. He gives me a look that says,'Can I hug you?' I think screw it. I run up to him, hitting a few people on the way, then throw my arms around his neck and kiss him full on the lips. I unwrap my arms from Tobias's neck, and turn to look at a very shocked Eric. Tobias turns to look as well.

"Is there a problem?" he asks with slight sarcasm. I laugh and Tobias turns to smile at me. Eric turns around and leaves. Again I laugh, and this time Tobias joins me, his arms still around my waist. I wriggle from his grasp, walk to his side, and lace my fingers with his. I notice Eric wasn't the only one looking. A few of the people that were stirring and standing in that back are looking surprised as well. I'm still smiling as Christina walks up, her hand grasping Will's.

"I turn around and your gone making out with Four, what the hell," she punches my shoulder lightly," why didn't you tell me? I thought I was your friend?" she says with a fake pout.

Before I an answer Tobias says,"we thought if we told people they would think Tris's ranking was over favoritism, which it wasn't. Trust me it wasn't my plan to tell everyone right now," he looks at me.

"I'm sorry," I apologize.

"Its alright, they were to find out soon enough," he squeezes my hand.

"I understand, I'm happy for your Tris, but I wouldn't have thought that." Christina smiles at me, Will nodding at me with agreement.

"Omg Tris, now we can go on double dates!" I groan and look up at Tobias who is just laughing.

"It'll be fun!" Christina shouts

"Whatever," I mumble.

Uriah walks up to where we are all standing. "Hey are you gu..." he looks down at mine and Tobias's hands and he looks shocked.

He smiles and says "Woah, Tris! You seduced the instructor! Nice!" I blush and look away. Chris punches him for me.

"Ouch, you can pack a punch, anyway, would you like to come to my brothers house for a party?" He asks while rubbing his shoulder.

Chris and Will simultaneously say "Yes".

I glance at Tobias who just shrugs his shoulders. "Sure, what time?" I ask.

"Half an hour" he answers. I nod my head to him and he walks away.

"Well I need to get ready" Christina says pulling Will's hand towards the initiates dorm.

"Congrats again Tris," Will days before he leaves with Chris. I turn to Tobais

"I need to get ready too, I'll meet you Uriah's?"
"Sure" he replies, he bends down and gives me a quick, but sweet, kiss. "See you soon" he says before I walk away.