Prompt: Thane/femShep - femdom.

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When he thinks about it, Thane's not entirely sure how he ended up in a romantic relationship with the legendary Commander Shepard. By some exciting twist of fate, she fell right into his arms, saved him from destroying himself, and taught him how to love again. Shepard was loyal, strong, and above all, kind and patient.

Her patience, however… had its disadvantages. Like how she so patiently worked him, bit by painful bit, to the precipice of the most sensational pleasure of his life...

And left him hanging there.

"Patience, my love," she whispered. "You would think after all those years of assassin training you would have better control over yourself." The tone of her voice was thick with a sick kind of lust. She wore a smirk on her face that gave away just how much she enjoyed toying with him in this way - here, in her bedroom, pushing him firmly into the mattress with her unnaturally strong biotic abilities.

"Patience-" Thane grunted as she smooted her tongue up the underside of his shaft, "-is not as simple a concept as it seems when the pleasure at your touch is-" hot breath whispered over his erection and she scraped her fingernails just hard enough over his inner thighs, "-more powerful than any memory I would have to fall back on, Siha." His head fell back with a sigh as she abruptly took him into her mouth. His muscles screamed for relief, for the ability to squirm just enough to touch her. Just one more second, just one more spark of friction would be enough… if only she would-

She withdrew. Stood at the foot of the bed with one hand hanging casually in the air to maintain her biotic force. Enraptured by the very image of her, Thane thought very quickly about how to overthrow her control and end the slow buildup that he suddenly didn't care for, not after being teased for so damn long. Shepard was an outright sexy woman when she wanted to be, engulfed in a profound aura of confidence about her that set his blood on fire.

But then she finally let go, biotics winking out in one blissful second, and his body surged with reawakened desire.

Her body alight with crackling blue power, she descended upon him, and that night he truly did see stars.


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