AUTHOR'S NOTE: While I am okay with reviews that are constructive criticism, I do not appreciate reviews that are mindless insults. I would like to address the following review:

"Not biologically related"? Really? They have the same father which means they are half brother and sister. That's biological. Poorly crafted story and charaterizations are way off. I am done with this story.

First of all, I was talking about Parker and Brennan not being biologically related. Secondly, the purpose of is to allow writers to practice their skills creatively. There is no "right" or "wrong" answer here. If there is an aspect of my story that needs polishing, feel free to tell me so. But don't just say "poorly crafted" or "i am done" because that doesn't help me in anyway. All it does is make me upset and insecure. I am sorry I have not yet reached your standards.

Thank you again to all of those lovely reviewers who have been supporting me endlessly through their thoughts, suggestions, and encouragement. I know reviewers like this are very rare, but I just wanted to point out how useless and arrogant they are. Please let me know your thoughts, and I will try to update this story as soon as I have my creative juices flowing again. Love you all, and Happy Holidays!